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To the Sand Dunes

To the Sand Dunes With the moon as competition, A sack full of sky rockets, We kids will bring fruition. Firecrackers and dirt devils, Sparklers and flares, Sand in our shoes, Sand in our hair. Swinging a sky rocket, We just felt grown up, And if we got the colored kind, We’d squeal and jump and jump. Didn’t know much about Independence and freedom then, Just what we learned in school And flags flying in the wind. On the rolling sand dunes In another far away land, Our loved ones shot real fireworks, Where there was no marching band. I love them for it forever And I always will, But my 4th of July memories Are on the tops of those sandy hills.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/15/2018 5:09:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this beauty with us..You took me there.
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Date: 7/12/2018 10:09:00 AM
The innocence of youth is timelessly presented in this excellent poem, Sunlite. A visual beaut this poem be. Love and smiles, my dear friend.
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Date: 7/10/2018 5:41:00 AM
Another finely crafted beauty my friend! A fav.....
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:20:00 PM
ohh, what a soothing mind and a remarkable poem to boot, sun.. happy 4th!.. huggs
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:08:00 AM
Hi Sunlite.. I really enjoyed reading your creative work this morning. Your poem, my dog at my feet, and a hot cup a of Colombian coffee make for a perfect trifecta! Come see me today if you get a chance...
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/5/2018 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Lyric Man. Hardly anyone read this one, so I especially appreciate your comment.

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