To the Prodigal Child

If I could deliver myself to you 
on a silver blanket
that is prancing upon a lofty cloud 
with wine and cheese and all that you please
and NYC nights and summer lights
 
that will be my gift

If I could comfort the pain 
that stretches through your thoughts
and holds your hands heavy 
to your head
 
that will be my wish

If you lack the guidance and strength
in sheer loneliness 
to make right decisions
my strength and any wisdom 
that I have encountered
 
will be your wings of flight

The moment that you face inequity 
injustice
raw hatred 
of what I created you to be

I will be your warrior

If at the moment of sheer question 
of our Universe
of our God
overwhelms your very being
Unable to take any more

Lie still

I will go in your place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:19 AM
What a profound piece this is expressing the deep unconditional love for a child! I am a mother and I can definitely ditto these well-expressed sentiments! Superbly wonderful! Love and hugs. Pandita
Jordan Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Hi Pandita, yes the undying attachment that we have for our children is raw and beautiful. Thanks so much!
Mcferran Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Wow. This is powerful- I was especially captivated by the lines: "The moment that you face inequity/ injustice/ raw hatred/ of what I created you to be/ I will be your warrior"... We need more people in this world with these ideals! Very moving and inspiring poem! ;)
Jordan Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Rhona you are wonderful! Thanks my friend!
Michael Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 11:30 AM
You expressed a deep deep love in your write...it's beautiful...All the best my friend
Jordan Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Arturo, thank you!!!
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