To the Moon

Your warm kisses make my heart swoon
while my body's floating to the moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Woods Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 12:51 PM
Euphony? ... yes! Imagery?...uhhuh! Romance?... it's in there! Celestial?... why, yes! 100% A++! Xo
Kitchin Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Crystol, thank you.
La France Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Tania, your crystalline is beautiful, blessings
Kitchin Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 3:25 AM
Constance, thank you. It's an older poem but a good example for the contest.
Sharma Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 7:39 AM
I like this !! want to try it myself . Nice prompts you come up with!!
Kitchin Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Vandana, thank you.
Poteet Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 4:17 AM
Romantic thoughts, Tania, your crystalline brings back memories of younger, healthier days. Thanks for the contest; thanks for sharing an example.
Kitchin Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Reason, thank you.
Emate Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 1:30 AM
This a beautiful example. Thank you.
Kitchin Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 3:44 AM
Thompson, thank you.
Roper Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 10:55 PM
Thank you for the example.
Kitchin Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Eve, you're welcome.
Callus Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Just two lines, but definitely romantic, Tania! ~ Regards // paul
Kitchin Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Paul, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:55 PM
I remember this. Good example.
Kitchin Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Andrea, thank you.
Gilmour Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 10:20 AM
Oh such romantic and tender words of love Tania, and many congrats for your podium win! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kitchin Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Thank you Ann! :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 8:49 AM
Lovely, Tania. Congrats on your podium finish win.
Kitchin Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Thank you Line! :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 7:12 PM
so romantic!! Congrats for the awesome win, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 9:18 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Ashley Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 6:48 PM
Oh, such sweet rapture, Tania! Congratulations on your excellent win with your exceptional poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Kitchin Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 9:18 PM
Thank you Susan!
Allison Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 5:24 PM
lovely and romantic Tania, congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Thank you Jan!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 12:57 PM
A euphoric moment! Congratulations on your third place win, Tania!
Kitchin Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Thank you Kim, and thank you for my placement in your contest!
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Romantic & so sweet, Tania :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)!
Michael Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 4:24 AM
Nice...there something magical about it...
Kitchin Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 4:26 AM
Thank you!
Onclaud Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 3:01 PM
and you make me swoon, tania... how refreshing!...huggs
Kitchin Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Thank you Nette :) !
Gilmour Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Ohhhhh that is so beautiful Tania, I adore it...good luck in the contest, it is certainly a winner and a FAV for me. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kitchin Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Thank you!
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:54 AM
There's little more romantic than the moon to make lovers swoon, Tania. A delightful crystalline. Winning wishes for the contest, Carolyn
Kitchin Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Thank you!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Ooh I love it! Splendid! A sure winner, got my vote! Good luck! xomo (& a fave)
Kitchin Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Thank you Mo!
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