To the Greatest of All Beings

Dear lord, I write this letter short, A psalm from my heart, To cherish what thy have passed A gratitude for thy works. Forgive me, my lord For when I have faltered, The days I spent in agony, When thy voice wouldn't reach me. For the torment I laid upon myself, Hardly a moment to breathe, For chasing away thy peace, You bestowed upon me. Forgive me for dithering thy grace, For doubting thy place, Father, your love is absolute, For so I thank thee, on this Christmas eve. Thank you for loving me like a child, Yet raising me to be a woman! You are our savior on this dawn of storm, A keeper of our sinful souls. Never disregarding your children, Always there, like a bird to her nestlings Like a father to his daughters, Like a mother to her sons. This winter when snow shall reign, Painting all white and grey, I trust, you shall keep me warm In your burrow safe. 29/11/20 Christmas Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 12/3/2020 7:26:00 AM
Love your last two lines Carmael. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Carmael William
Date: 12/3/2020 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Linda!
Date: 12/3/2020 7:19:00 AM
Lovely prayer for the season. Merry Christmas and congrats on your placement in the Christmas contest! God bless you always
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Date: 12/3/2020 8:33:00 PM
Thank you Regina I enjoyed the contest!
Date: 11/29/2020 5:18:00 AM
Keep praying like that and heaven will be your earth...All the best
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:21:00 AM
I hope it would be.. Thank u!
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