To the Future Inhabitants of This Planet

The species “*****sapiens” was overwhelmed by greed. He was a creature who consumed more than he would need. In the fabric of the world, man definitely earned his place. They built skyscrapers and bridges, and sent rockets into space. These beings possessed a major flaw of distinction: Their self-destructive tendencies drove them to extinction. That is why none of them today can be found. Have you noticed that humans are no longer around? To you future intelligent beings who on this planet exist: The errors man made comprise a very long list. Share and distribute evenly before it is too late. Otherwise, you will also suffer man’s inevitable fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/16/2013 8:56:00 PM
great write Robert,,, I look at war and think "all for a piece of dirt". ,,,, have a great day ;}
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Date: 1/8/2013 2:43:00 PM
ROBERT, , stopping by to say hi and read your winning poem in CATIE'S ""Message in a Bottle "'' contest~ nice poem to read. have yourself a good day. always & forever ~LINDA
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Date: 12/29/2012 8:14:00 PM
Congrats..made me kind of sad.. but you pretty much covered our civilization. Good work. BG
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Date: 12/29/2012 7:33:00 PM
Robert, congrats ~SKAT
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Date: 12/29/2012 3:18:00 PM
congrats on this wonderful poem, Robert
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Date: 12/29/2012 11:26:00 AM
Big congrats for your win , Robert! Succinctly stated!!
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Date: 12/29/2012 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations on you HM Robert xx
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Date: 12/22/2012 7:09:00 AM
This is a fact my friend, I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this morning! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/22/2012 5:54:00 AM
Communistic
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Date: 12/22/2012 5:43:00 AM
A prediction all too likely to be true... Terry (good work)
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