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To the Depth of Love

Through the break of morn scents of new roses Shall taunt tease; teardrops of lilies shimmer. Butterflies about flitting, small birds sing In the ardent autumn color branches Inviting anxious fluttering light through. Lovers lay for a while though day closes Truss romantic breath of waft sweetness dream As pleasing painted meadow proposes Poetic passion beat; light grows dimmer. Small birds sing, butterflies about flitting Over sweet plant's nectar it composes 3/26/2021 Poetry Contest: Abracadabra March Magic Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 4/15/2021 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a pretty write. I love your line, "Butterflies about flitting, small birds sing. A lovely picture you have painted. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 4/15/2021 2:42:00 AM
Well crafted words, Eve, illustrates the magic that you have created with ease of this rather challenging poetic format, kudos, my compliments for your participation and placement, Aloha!
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Date: 3/28/2021 3:25:00 PM
A lovely painting of words, Eve! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/27/2021 8:16:00 PM
Superb imagery! Each line flows like a silken sand.Lovely!
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Date: 3/26/2021 1:20:00 PM
Great use of imagery and a bit of alliteration make this entry stand out, Eve. Best wishes for a win!
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Date: 3/26/2021 9:31:00 AM
Superb imagery enhanced with rhyme and flow. I relish this form, don't you? You have to really work at writing a good one, and you have done just that. I really loved it.
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Date: 3/26/2021 6:18:00 AM
This definitely has depth. All the best for the contest Eve. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 3/26/2021 12:06:00 AM
A poetic depiction of two lovers in Autumn scenery, enjoying their company of love, Incredibly beautiful poem. Best for a win.
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