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To Summer

Passing the grains of rivers mothered by the your sun, tossed copper wind and shores rail inch by inch-- meter by meter-- they drift along of a violet dayfall. And glittering borealis slopes on emblazoned hem; until land, sea, air and dazed fire, wrap the colors of your grasses; as a hundred villages await the first notes of your opening sonata; a tingle from a raw desire circling a bonfire of wildflowers, in heat like a maiden, restless! Open Poetry Contest Charlotte Jade Puddifoot 11/30/2015

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Date: 12/15/2015 11:29:00 PM
LEON, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/14/2015 4:07:00 PM
Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 12/14/2015 2:18:00 PM
This poem is aflame! Congratulations on your spot!
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Date: 12/14/2015 10:58:00 AM
now you are a new name on my winners' list! beautiful personification of summer in this poem, lovely imagery and wording (get rid of 'the' in second line) - congrats on your win in my contest!
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