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To Sleep, Perhaps To Dream

I lie there in my meadow bed
Looking at a slate blue sky
The dampened earth beneath my head
A gleaming brightness stings my eyes

A faint breeze cools my sunbathed face
The grass is prickly on my skin
Above the wisps of clouds float by
Entrancing me till dreams creep in

Like Rip Van Winkle, taking rest
My eyes won't open, time is space
Such solitude within my breast
But soon home calls me to my place

The sound of thunder coming near
I rise refreshed, my mind so keen
I need to run before the rain
But I'll be back again to dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/3/2008 12:31:00 PM
liked the word slate blue sky, very well worded poem all the way through, it a great flow to it, so tender and refreshing to read.
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Date: 9/2/2008 6:06:00 PM
Wonderful to read! Very well written.
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Date: 9/2/2008 4:08:00 PM
What an enchanting poem...I have done that so many times, I feel transported there...beautiful Carrie...again to dream, indeed, always!!! always dream. Love Kristin
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Date: 9/2/2008 3:11:00 PM
I don't think I've waken up refreshed and with a keen mind in a long time. : ) A beautiful write that reads like a dream. So peaceful. Could feel myself there. Well written. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/2/2008 2:35:00 PM
a warm and gentle and very beautiful piece of poetry. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
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Date: 9/2/2008 2:24:00 PM
Very beautiful poem the clearly shows just how peaceful and content life can be - Great job - God Bless
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Date: 9/2/2008 1:54:00 PM
Wow, Carrie, this is beautiful....I give it a 10...such perfect planning and execution. In mind I'm lying out on that meadow. Love, Daver
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