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to roam midst twilight fells

    on fancy's boundless, bending stream

     seldom, those wonders, as they seem

    plunge harmonies or hells

naked, we nourish ... each new dream





~ 4th Place ~  in the "Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Sponsor.

(I chose theme number three - a dream)

Syllables counted at HowManySyllables.com - 6-8-8-6-8

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/24/2019 7:43:00 PM
I think many of us chose the dream theme. This is quality writing, my friend!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:12:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Andrea, I greatly appreciate your comments! :o) <3
Date: 5/24/2019 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:11:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Robert, you are always kind! :o)
Date: 5/23/2019 9:32:00 AM
Ditto to Kurt's comment, masterful indeed!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, John! :-)
Date: 5/21/2019 11:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 5/21/2019 4:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - I'm so happy you liked my poem, my friend - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 5/18/2019 11:14:00 PM
A perfect content in a perfect form. Oh, my, rhymes! A masterpiece of the genre.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 5/21/2019 4:15:00 PM
You are very kind, Kurt, and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my write ... many kind thanks to you, my friend! Blessings! :-)