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To: Poet Kim

Listen Kim, my dear, the facts are oh so clear. Am I to understand we’re loving the same man? No need for jealousy. There’s some for you and me. I know you’ve been with him. You have that peaceful grin. Furthermore I see you seek to bow down at his feet. You give me competition with your sincere petition. He’s King of my heart too so now you know what's true, clandestine intimacy touched by divinity. Please don't try to hide, the truth shut up inside. Instead go on and glow to know He loves us so. 5/14/18

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Date: 6/2/2018 9:29:00 PM
Wow, lovely, Sian. Congrats on your most deserving top win.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/6/2018 9:46:00 PM
Thanks Line.
Date: 5/22/2018 4:46:00 PM
Love how you addressed the theme, Sian. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/6/2018 9:46:00 PM
Thanks and blessing, Janis.
Date: 5/22/2018 10:58:00 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful inspirational, well written write ... Hugs Eve
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/6/2018 9:46:00 PM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 5/21/2018 2:40:00 PM
what a lovely poem of your shared faith:-) Many congrats on your win Sian:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/6/2018 9:45:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 5/21/2018 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. That is a good thing to have in common. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/21/2018 10:56:00 AM
Kim's faith was so evident in her writing that I couldn't pass it by. Thanks and blessings, Janis.
Date: 5/21/2018 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this unique and refreshing poem on what we have in common. Enjoyed.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/21/2018 10:56:00 AM
Thanks and blessings.
Date: 5/21/2018 9:11:00 AM
Sian, this was so clever! I loved it! Congrats and hugs...Kim
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/21/2018 10:57:00 AM
Your faith is strong and evident in your writing. Keep believing and thanks for the honored placement.

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