Kash Poet Poet Rhyme

To Phyllis Babcock From Kashinath

Phyllis!Phyllis!
Help me outta this!
Tell me how to
write and please you?
P.D. has ordered
'Write on Phyllis,
you must oblige
or will perish!':)
So I googled your name 'Phyllis',
you from Canada,your name from Greece.
I know you are kind and tender,
all these made your pen much sweeter.
Oh,yes!Tell me how is Aaron,
your bundle of joy,little grandson!
For him all my blessings and love,
cell phone ringing,my time is up.
Tell me one thing just secretly,
has P.D.ordered you too,like me?





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:)Obviously PD didn't order me:)))


Placement:1st ;(January 2012)

Contest:Gift Exchange

Sponsor:Poet Destroyer(Irma)

By:kashinath karmakar

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Jon Arno January 5, 2012 at 4:19 PM Congratulations on your win Kash...Best regards, Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2012 at 5:44 AM Congrats on your win in the "Gift Exchange" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud January 3, 2012 at 9:08 PM oooooh, you floored me again, kashi... sweet cheers for your top win!.. applause!.:) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi January 3, 2012 at 3:06 PM awww Kash so charming to see you flirt with Phyll..both of you abit shy a hard write but a complimentary one! Light & Love Congrad's

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2012 at 9:16 PM congrats on a well deserved win, and I was not late for school,but I sure was rushing out the door. hahaha

Joyce Johnson January 2, 2012 at 8:47 PM Well done Kash. I am sure Phyllis is pleased.

Don Johnson January 2, 2012 at 3:31 PM good one about the lady, kash. well done here mate:)

Wilma Neels January 2, 2012 at 10:31 AM Kash, I enjoyed reading this again ;) congratulations on your win with this cute write ;)

Tony Lane January 2, 2012 at 8:03 AM Congratulations on your impressive win.

David Williams January 2, 2012 at 2:03 AM Kash congrats on your win, Happy New Year..David

Greg Stanley January 1, 2012 at 10:12 PM Very very nice Kash, Congratulations on your win, Greg

Gwendolen Song January 1, 2012 at 10:08 PM ps....go Phyllis, GO! Awesome honor!

Gwendolen Song January 1, 2012 at 10:08 PM Love the little footle note..ha ha. HOw cute. Kash, I have enjoyed writing along side u and many other fine poets on this site over the past year. Let's continue on in the same fashion for another! Gwendolen

Bl Devnath January 1, 2012 at 10:04 PM Congratulation for being 1st in the contest in the Happy new year. Loved it. bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 1, 2012 at 8:02 PM Congratulations Kash x

Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2012 at 7:03 PM KASH, happy new year.. and CONGRATULATIONS ;-) on my gift exchange contest. Thank you for being part of the joy of giving another poet a poem from the bottom of your heart,, the best wishes to you and your family this 2012 year,..always p.d.

Phyllis Babcock December 27, 2011 at 11:27 AM Thank you for the sweet poem and no PD has not ordered me to reply. Yes, my little grandson is awesome and just got home last night from the time spent with them. I am very behind on the soup and thanks to Andrea she brought my attention to the poem. Thanks it is so nice to be acknowledged by a poem. Best wishes for the New Year my friend. love phyl

Sara Kendrick December 27, 2011 at 10:43 AM Good luck in PD's contest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work...Sara

Kash Poet December 27, 2011 at 12:27 AM Thanks john loving iii for your kind comment.I feel the same way like you .Hope next time PD will not make any mistake.

John Loving Iii December 26, 2011 at 8:33 PM p,d. made a mistake. she should have given phyliss to me. john

Gwendolen Song December 24, 2011 at 3:34 AM Belly laughing, Kash! Phyllis will be D-lited! I love how you researched the roots of her name...clever and quick-witted you are! Hope your weekend is off to a grrrreat start! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich December 23, 2011 at 4:24 PM Just had to see this again. This is so charming, Kash. Thanks for what you said about my sonnets. They should be my forte by now after doing 300 of them! Actually, I don't do them much anymore. So many other new things to try over here! I have only two hours to make dinner and prepare for my son coming tonight. I'm FLYING.....

Jack Horne December 23, 2011 at 2:35 PM LOL, I love this sweet piece - and I'm sure Phyllis will too, Kash. Many congrats on all your wins : )

Carrie Richards December 23, 2011 at 9:00 AM This is a delight!! Great job, Kash...Phyllis will smile to read!! (ps...thanks so much for being an extra eye for me, and finding my slips in Nikko's contest! !!! That was so kind of you! Happy Holidays to you Kash!! :)

Wilma Neels December 23, 2011 at 8:21 AM This one is just awesome Kash, it has that playful feel to it.. Thanks for the smiles while reading this one and all the best for Pd's contest ;)

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