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To My Hood Friend

I FEEL SICK! I FEEL slick! I deal sufferings! i heal the suffered- my dear friend all is owed to you, all is because of our first sparks, all is because of out lost joys- the absolutes you dealt me left me knowing the truth, clinging to it like a life line to bring me "home"- all the thoughts we had turned into lies for whatever reason-we let them. now i just write this sill poem to keep from imploding to you all is owed-dw

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2016 8:01:00 PM
Ebert, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 3:03:00 PM
EBERT, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:05:00 AM
can feel the emotions
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Date: 12/9/2010 8:53:00 PM
Interesting use of form, What made you use this style for this write.
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Date: 12/9/2010 7:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ebert. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:22:00 AM
Nice Bio you have penned, Ebert
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