To My First Born

started loving you before I knew you were you
surprise pregnancy but a delight
wanted you to be loved from the beginning

felt close to you from the onset
before you had fingers or toes
before you knew me, I knew you

every kick or punch a reminder
you were here now, a new being
a fresh start, an innocent to protect

you came fast, and you were loved
from the onset, immediately, by all of us
your eyes so beautiful, I could cry over it

when I held you I became a new person
a mommy, your mommy, and I felt beautiful
more beautiful than I had ever felt before

You gave me the world, with your innocent eyes
and your happy laugh, and your keen sense of humor
I never wanted you to grow up. I wanted to keep you small

But you grew and became the best part of me, 
you became an inspiration, a well-educated, smart,
exciting piece of me I had never dreamed possible.
And yet here you are, my firstborn, here you are!

Written 5-14-2020
Choice Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Awtry Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 12:02 PM
beautiful! yes, you become a new person when you become a mommy... didn't know it was possible to love so much <3
Krutsinger Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 10:27 AM
It is crazy but you do not know until you fully know.
Hamilton Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 8:55 PM
A very touching write Caren, congrats on POTD!
Krutsinger Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 4:40 AM
Thank you John. I was excited believe me!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 10:51 AM
Nice tribute to your firstborn! Congratulations on POTD!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 7:59 PM
Thank you Kim. I was gobsmacked but happily!
Wolf Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 6:51 PM
Hey, I missed out on this one somehow. Congrats on POTD (and even moreso on your 1stborn!) :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:09 AM
Thank you. I am thrilled that she read it.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 2:11 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A new mommy and her first born are very special. A great story/poem. Enjoy your day and win................
Krutsinger Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Thank you Paula.
Michael Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Lovely...Congratulation Caren on POTD...straight from the heart
Krutsinger Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Thank you Arturo. I just threw it onto a page.
Mcgee Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 8:24 AM
Wow...beautiful. Congrats on POD too.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 7:45 PM
Thank you Jeanne. ??????
Roper Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 1:29 AM
congratulations on potd great tribute. Hugs Eve
Krutsinger Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Thank you Eve. I am happy to report that my firstborn Angela, has read this and was pleased.
Nicole Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 6:50 PM
Your thoughts hold me so close. My eyes are smiling. : ) This is beautiful in every way. "you grew and became the best part of me" An incredible feeling indeed, for you. Such a lovely tribute to your daughter. Congratulations Caren, on Poem of the Day. : ) Brandy
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:16 PM
Thank you Brandy
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Congratulations on POTD, a lovely tribute poem!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:17 PM
Thank you Tania.
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 6:10 PM
what a charming tribute to your daughter, congrats on potd:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 6:05 PM
Caren dear, I am thrilled to see this gorgeous poem being honored with POTD! It is not surprising it has had many honors. I loved it and faved it as you know. Big Congratulations my friend! Blessings xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:19 PM
Thank you Connie. I am very honored.
Watson Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 3:56 PM
That's really beautiful, Caren. I know that many of us will relate to such sentiments which you have put into words so masterfully. A well-deserved POTD
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:20 PM
Thank you Wendy. I was amazed and grateful.
Kauffman Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 2:21 PM
So lovely Caren. I love the phrase "you became the best part of me." Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy the honor. Blessings to you.
Kauffman Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 1:10 AM
I wrote something like this for my boys and put it into a book with a collection of poems chronicling their childhood. I, like you, hope your daughter had read it.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:20 PM
Thank you Sam. I am hoping my daughter has read it.
Mishra Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 2:05 PM
The first born is always the most special with the anticipation, love, beauty of the experiences for the first time in life. Such a beautiful feeling penned by you. Congratulations on POTD. God bless you :)
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:21 PM
It is an amazing feeling you never forget.
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 12:10 PM
- A wanted and loved child .... lovely written, Caren ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I was so happy!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 11:37 AM
A mother's love is like no other and you have truly captured it in your beautiful words! Congrats on POTD!! xx Rhonda
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:22 PM
Thank you. Her name was selected by me when I was eight. Angela.
Doll Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Caren, you have captured a Mother's love so well in your poem, just beautiful. Congratulations on POTD. It is well deserved, Best Wishes~ Warren
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:22 PM
Thank you so much Warren.
Gilmour Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 9:43 AM
Such a wonderful poem Caren and so worthy of the honour of POTD - congratulations my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Ann. Love is always well received on this site.
La France Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Caren, sweet poem and congratulations on receiving POTD, enjoy the honor _Constance
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:24 PM
Thank you Constance. I have three daughters and I felt this way about all of them.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Wow! <3 Congratulations on POTD dear poetess, xomo!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 7:24 PM
Thank you. Hey! Did you rename yourself?
Warrior Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Beautifully done my cool friend...Congrats!! on POTD!! Caren...a lovely story...best wishes from the Wingster :o)
Cunningham Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 1:43 AM
A beautiful tribute to your daughter Caren, congratulations on POTD honours. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Thank you Tom. I am gobsmacked and excited!
Gaul Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Straight from the heart. Honest. True and connecting. The best of what poetry is about. This may well be the best of the lot here today including my own. Terrific piece, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Thank you so much Greg. I appreciate it!
Ball Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 10:55 AM
What a wonderful love letter to your first born child. Bravo my friend. Love this. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB
Krutsinger Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Thank you so much Judy.
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