To My Father

As we bought the three-storied house With our dreams and desires To provide him a serene life. But it broke our hearts to lose him. But Dad, did not go alone A part of us went with him The day God called him home. To feel his presence all the time We hang his picture in the formal room To keep him with us. For four decades, we thought of him In silence repeated his name All that was left for an answer Was his picture in the frame. As once upon a time His picture was in the frame But now picture is decayed Due to the sands of time. But the memories still remain. There is a vacancy in the frame Not sure, my picture will fit in As my time comes.
+++++++ June 5, 2014 Form Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta First Place win Contest:Father's Day by Carol Eastman
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Sergi Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 7:10 PM
Hi Dr.Ram: I was finally able to open up the soup mail you sent me regarding your two poems, "To my father" and "A bawdy limerick". My first sentence commented on your fathers poem and my second sentence commented on your bawdy limerick poem. I was not referring to your fathers poem as being vulgar. Please forgive my poor verbiage.
Smith Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 6:33 AM
Dr. Mehta, love the thought of if your picture will fit in the frame, as we would suggest, trying to fill his shoes.. Congratulations on your win with such a lovely tribute to your father.. Hugs.. Arlene
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June 11, 2014 at 10:36 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:12 PM
i miss mine as well, dr.ram.. beauitful work deserving a fine spot ; congrats and huggs
Rocheleau Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 1:28 PM
Very nice work. My father passed away not to long ago, (not to offend) but it was easy to slip him in their as I read.
Wilson Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 9:55 AM
This is a beautiful and distinguished tribute to your father Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your fine win ...love, Deb
Sietesantos Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:48 AM
Congrats, Dr. Ram on your fine win!
Villarosa Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 5:26 AM
Well written in remembering your father, a fond recollections of a man that you dearly loved. Congrats on your winning, Dr. Ram.
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:57 PM
Your father made you the man you are today. His inspiration rests in you and gives to others. A truly fine tribute my friend!! Congrats on your win!!!!!!
Johnson Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:13 PM
Oh I'm sorry about the picture. I am sure yours will fit fine. Love, Joyce
Chutani Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 7:53 PM
An emotional one, Dr. Ram. Cheers for your win. Mohan
George   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Heart felt poem, Dr. Ram. Our world is never the same after we loss someone we love. bfn Elaine
Jamoner Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Awwhhh I can really relate to this poem since my father died for many years already. Great write!
Sergi Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Hi Dr. Ram: A sad but heart felt tribute to your father. Congratulations on your Bawdy win and thank you for your comment on mine.
Raven Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 7:36 AM
"There is a vacancy in the frame. Not sure, my picture will fit As my time comes." I literally got choked up reading that bit. Great eulogy, Doctor. - Raven
Delaney Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 2:02 AM
A beautiful poem to your father. It will place well among the winners. Hugs, SuZ
Lindley Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:55 PM
This my friend, is a very great tribute to your father and written so very well.. Surely he was a great man..... Bravoooooooo!!!!!!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 8:45 AM
hi Dr. Ram, thank you for sharing this gem in tribute to your father. It reminded me of my own father who passed years ago. This is definitely another winner!
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June 7, 2014 at 5:52 AM
DR. Ram; This is just beautiful. A great tribute to your father. I am sure that from heaven he is smiling. Good luck in the contest. and have a great day... Lucilla
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June 6, 2014 at 9:30 PM
gosh, this is really good. I just entered an oldie about my stepdad but nothing so wonderful as this one about YOUR dad. I think it will do great in the contest. So heartfelt. One of your best.
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June 6, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Dear Dr. Ram, this is such a beautifully written dedication to your father. I was very touched by the poem, especially when you said he didn't go alone because, "A part of us went with him." This is so true. I hope the large portrait of my father is not weathered by time until after I'm gone. It makes me think he's still with me. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn (Thanks for reading my Sijo on Elaine. Means more than you can imagine.)
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June 6, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Great work honoring the memory and life of your father..It is good to know that you had a great father to love and to love you..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Dorken Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 12:30 PM
Wonderful poem, your father would be proud of your tribute of thought and word.
Christian Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Im blessed with my poetry soup family right here. A place I belong. Home.
Christian Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 7:50 AM
A lovely tribute. Thanks flook forward to reading more of your workor your free back on my poem I did it my way Sadly my childhood was not happy especialty once my mother left home. My sister was not so nice and used to locked out on the street when she used to go out. So I never ever used to.do anything she said. Did knock a door run out of Borden and not feeling good. Look forward in reading more of your work. Thanks for your support.
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