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To My Dear Daughter

My poor sweet love, what can I say?
Although I am a father, I know the pain!
No need to tell me what you're feeling,
Your sorrow is etched in your eyes.
Yet, my little one, there is hope for tomorrow
Hard as it may seem for now.
Still cry you must, for the heartbreak
Is not easy to bear.  Don't ask why my love,
Don't.  Instead, say I accept the pain.
I know it's not so easy but try you must.
Oh, how I hate to see you so sad.
You were always so sure of yourself 
Now I see you broken like a feather 
For who can bear two operations for kidney stones?

Heartaches come and heartaches go
They do leave ungainly timeless scars
Operations have always been common,
Since the inception of this evil world.
But you’ll be happy once again I'm sure
The pain will end in a few weeks when
In your arms, you'll hold your two lovely children.
Then you'll have no time to grieve.
Instead, you'll cry for joy.
The sun will shine again, and you will sing once more.


With thanks to Sotto Poet for his support.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Daniel Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:49 PM
Sad to hear about your daughter and her pain, Victor, wishing her good recovery:)
Y. Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 6:20 AM
Victor, I just saw this heartfelt write. The love you have for your daughter is evident. I pray that she recovers soon-Alexis
Skelly Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 2:30 AM
Sending love and prayers to a beloved daughter...Delice
Tor Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Victor I used to suffer from Kidney stones and I know her grief. If they are uric acid stones she has to stop eating meats. If they are oxilate they have a product called Chanca Piedra you can order online that works well. Also she should find out from her Dr what kind of stones they are. For example the Uric acid ones you can prevent by no meat and dissolve by straight lemon juice. Lemon juice from lemons will dissolve them. So sorry Victor to hear... She will be ok it is all about diet to
Tor Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 1:58 PM
prevent...
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Sometimes you say you fictionalize poems, but this seems so heartfelt, I feel it's either your own daughter or a friend's. You made this so caring.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 10:57 AM
My daughter and she still needs care.
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Lovely and heartfelt Victor. I do hope her pain subsides quickly and she can be with her loving family with her smiling face again. Linda
Messina Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 4:25 AM
Although your daughter has been through much pain, as a father myself I know the pain that it put you through as well. I hope your daughter is feeling better, Victor. Sending healing prayers her way. Nice write dear friend.
Eslinger Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 11:26 PM
Endearing words from the deep of a father-poet’s love, becoming intercessor to sympathize in hopes of lessening the pain, in my experience, any time a father would speak as you eloquently here, a daughter is likewise touched to the DEEPESTof her being. This brought back my own father’s touch to me. Love, true love be with you always!
Horsman Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 10:42 PM
So heartfelt is this, Victor, i do hope your daughter, soon returns to wellbeing and no pain..(hope you get this comment already tried 3 time, and everything froze)
Edmonds  Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 7:34 PM
That’s so kind and caring, what a wonderful father you are Victor, I’m sure your beautiful daughter is comforted by these beautiful words. Blessings to you both… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:50 AM
A beautiful daughter, a dad’s heartbreak. My prayers for her. Hugs ~ Kim
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:40 AM
I can feel your pain as a dad and her pain at facing the coming problems. The fact that she has children will keep her on her toes. I have prayed for her and her situation. I hope she is feeling much better soon. Your visit to my page is uplifting. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 3:32 AM
Victor, a heartfelt poem, your daughter is beautiful, hope she is feeling better soon!
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 8:56 PM
Oh Victor, she is beautiful! I will pray for her, and ask my husband and children to remember her in prayer too. I wanted to thank you for the visit to my poem 'Paid in Full' and for the comment you left, it was an important note to me, so I actually updated it. Thank you again. I hope your week and your precious daughter's week will become a wonderful joy, that she feels better very soon. May God bless you and your family.
Buehler Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 2:06 PM
My heart and prayers go out to your daughter, Victor, and I'm wishing her a full and speedy recovery. Your love shines like a beacon, which I am sure will aid the process. Blessings.
Poet Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Victor, your daughter has a really pretty appearance. It may be extremely heartbreaking and excruciating for a parent to witness the suffering of their kid. However, I am aware that you are a kind and compassionate father. I'm praying that she makes a speedy recovery so that you may put your worries behind you. Victor, I am very honored by your kind words; doing so is an obligation I take very seriously.
Roper Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 7:57 AM
My prayers are still with her my friend. I will soon pass. Lovely tribute of love and concern. A father's love
George Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 6:36 AM
I can sense your pain as a loving father ! Don't worry about operations for kidney stone. I have undergone five surgeries, two were natural.... ceaseraian. The other three were for serious issues ! My prayers are for your daughter!
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 5:24 AM
Love of father--so endearing and comforting. I am sure she treasures your thoughts and soothing voice.
M  Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 4:02 AM
Oh Victor what a loving caring dad you are. Your daughter looks lovely Victor. I hope she has a quick recovery and then you can stop worrying. Cuddles….Debx
Seeker Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 3:13 AM
So heartfelt and painful for a parent to see their child in pain. Wish her a quick recovery
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 2:17 AM
- It pains a father and mother when one's own child suffers (no matter how old the "child" is) - Your beautiful daughter is suffering now ... but, as you say "the sun will shine again" ... - I wish her a speedy recovery - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear that Victor, I hope the operation goes well for her. Tom
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