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To My Daughters

To my girls I want you to know That I see you As equals on every level Not just my daughters My little pink princesses I see you as young women Powers within this world With oceans to offer A lifetime still to learn. Live your lives As though I was still with you Be free and fearless For you can see Life is so short Take all opportunities And shape them to your dreams You have all the tools And I will be watching over you Be good to one another There are only two of you The strength between sisters Is a bond for life. Your analytic minds Will help you make good decisions Fair and just rewards will ensue. Your radiating hearts Will gift you many friendships Maybe special love All in good time. You will never be alone For you have a deep sense of self This will be fortified With my passing Your feet firmly planted Will serve you well Balancing the ups and downs because that's how life is. Always be true to yourself Life will be true to you too. Do not mourn my death I am not going far away. My illness has progressed My time is nigh There is a greater plan One we cannot see But we have had a great life As mother and daughters Our journeys together live on in our memories. My loves I will hold you safe In my heart Now and forever I will always be with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Eiken. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:22:00 PM
Eiken, congratulations on winning in Walayee's contest with this great entry. This has been a pleasure to read.
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:08:00 AM
Awesome job Eiken, good to see your most worthy poem at the top. Congratulations on your poem's honored third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:35:00 PM
Great write and exactly what a mother would say if she had your gifted pen. Congratulations. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of walayee, Eiken
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:42:00 PM
Congrats Eiken on your wonderful win in Lay's contest with this touching entry luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 1/27/2011 7:53:00 AM
Lovely eiken, now i know how you understood my poetry so well, these very words i would tell my daughters, very intense and positive notes here...sunkan
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Date: 1/26/2011 1:46:00 AM
A great tribute to your daughters,Eiken.I also had similar feelings when I wrote 'To My Child'.Thanks for congrats.
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:03:00 AM
Sweet and tender touching piece Eiken.. daughters are such fun.. I have five boys so am enjoying your poetry on these lovely lasses.. with luv..
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:42:00 AM
Very moving verses, Eiken, my friend! Are you ill or is this only fictive in your write? Enjoyed the read today and a great tribute to yout daughters...Gert
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:32:00 AM
Very touchy, moving and very inspirational and encouraging thoughts for your daughters. Eiken
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:20:00 AM
Eiken, in some cultures women still take a back seat to men. I like the way your offer words of empowerment to your daughters. This is a very inspiring poem for young women. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:07:00 AM
always a difficult task to deal with 'moving on'..... you've given us .a very moving poem and well-written....I sincerely hope that it is not factually based, Eiken......but if it is, allow me to offer my sympathy........best wishes Syd
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