To My 16-Year Old Self

Hello, I’m you, and you just wrote this poem! You’ve written hundreds more! One day you’ll find A place that poet friends world-wide call home. Creatively, you’ll exercise your mind. Start now to hone your writing skills, and when you go for that semester in Madrid, you won’t learn Spanish well enough! Please, then, return to Spain! I know you’ll wish you did. You needn’t try to get through college fast. Get work in Spain. Learn from experience. Don’t marry quite so young. Life is a blast. Try things you really love. Gain confidence! There’s coming in the 80’s - VCR, and later on will come the internet. Invest in them. I think you could go far, Money matters. You just don’t know that yet! Life will be nice, but long before you age, You’ve got to save, or it will be too late. You need a pension plan - advice most sage! But cash it out before two-thousand-eight! For one brief week soon coming, there’s a guy, and no one like him will you meet again! He’ll go back home, but three years later try to look you up, but you’ll be married then. . . Could things with him have worked? How can you know? But you and I so seldom take a chance! With what I’ve told you, let’s see how things go. . . Will you change fate and opt out for romance? For the What Would You Say Poetry Contest of Alexis Y
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Grasso Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 6:04 AM
Found this one looking way back in your pages. Again, this is like listening to the poet recite while I am actually reading! Love the whole thing. ...Fran
Nunez Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 10:27 AM
Oh wow...It's only now that I got to read this! Really enjoyed this write, Andie. Makes one wonder of what could have been :-) Congrats!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Superb win Andrea with this awesome write... big congrats!
Inman Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 9:57 AM
Nice Andrea, love the first line. Obviously an older write but it fits perfectly for this contest. Did you revise it?
Lane Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 7:51 AM
This was such fun to read, Andrea...well done.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 6:47 PM
Congratulations. Excellent poem.
Y. Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 6:09 PM
Andrea, you had a great conversation with your younger self. Congratulations on your 2nd place.Thanks for participating in my contest:-) Alexis
A  Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Andrea, nice win. SKAT
Scars Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 3:53 PM
WOW! Congrats on your well deserved win!! Be blessed -LU
Allison Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 3:49 PM
many congrats on your win Andrea :-) hugs jan xx
Hicks Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 11:59 PM
This was fun to learn more about you Andrea. It sounds like a fun exercise to see what you would have done differently, if you could simply have a conversation with the younger you. Loved the bits of humor splashed here and there as well. Me writing a poem to my sixteen-year-old self wouldn't have much, however (seeing how that's slightly over two years ago... haha).
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January 8, 2013 at 4:30 PM
Andrea, , Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. pd
Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 5:45 PM
You are still alive..if you know you should take more chances, then you should ;) Congrad's on your win Light & Love
Babcock Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 8:33 PM
IF only we knew how our life would have been. Great write. love phyl soup mail
Arowolo Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 2:57 PM
Wonderful write,Andrea....Great work..Congrats on your well deserved win...
Sibanda Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
Gasun Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 7:53 AM
Hi, my dearest poet friend! I feel great rereading your excellent entry and seeing it in the super winners' list! MY BIG HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR TOP WIN! Thank you so much for everything and again, HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR! (w/soupmail) love always, Leonora
Widjanarko Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 1:57 AM
Congrats on your big win Andrea! :D really an interesting poem Andrea, anyway happy new year! :D
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 5:18 PM
Well Done. Happy New year as well!
May Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 4:32 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea....Happy New Year
Williams Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 4:23 PM
Andrea I loved the advice about cashing in before the crash, overall it was excellent and you need to get back to Spain, well done my friend...David
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December 31, 2012 at 3:06 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations and Happy New Year...,
Bauer Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 2:55 PM
a wonderful poem and so deserving of your win in the contest! i love the suggestions you've made to your younger self...
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December 31, 2012 at 2:20 PM
Big congrats Andrea love, love this one and all the best for the new year xx
Eastman Avatar
December 28, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Great work... Love the advice. This should go far in the contest!
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