To Mr Thornton

He claimed I was a young rambuncious lad, very sharp:
He knows how to solve a Rubik's Cube and play the harp!
But did Mr. Thornton know
that I used to be a simple so 'n' so?
Family and friends once said,
"That piano is just way over your head!"
Being the dreamer I took it metaphorically
not realizing they were concerned for my safety.
And just as quick as one would drop a hat,
under half a ton of wood, I became all too flat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 12, 2013 at 9:05 AM
HA HA! You should know better..its REALLY heavy. Lol! This totally made my laugh of the morning! This was great. :D
Hicks Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 11:20 PM
It's all "punnages" in this piece. And after reading C.L. Thornton's funnies I can't help but think these thoughts... ha ha.
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June 6, 2013 at 9:04 PM
Very nice poem.
Hicks Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 12:12 AM
Thanks Matt.
Seal Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 4:58 PM
From C Sharp minor to (H)E Flat major at the drop of a hat lol. Very good Tim. Take care, Richard
Hicks Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 12:12 AM
Just spitting out some musical punnage (hooray for made up words!)... :)
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June 6, 2013 at 12:24 PM
I absolutely love this one. It made me laugh out loud!!
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June 7, 2013 at 12:11 AM
Thanks Monterey.
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