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To Lose the Muse

I lose my muse When I peruse A thousand things to do, Oh Muse, I rue The need to choose Between my work And you! I lose your flow, Where did you go? I stand to man my station. I wonder in amuse-ment If you took a long vacation?

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/3/2024 5:53:00 AM

Having to choose the chores or the muse, that’s how it for poets. The muse for me usually wins, it won’t tomorrow that’s my promise to myself. Enjoyed the read… Beryl

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/1/2024 9:59:00 AM

We're lost without our muse, dear BJ. Your poetry beautifully depicts the everlasting battle between daily life and creative expression. It conveys a deep sense of desire and grief for the lost inspiration using, a powerful language.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/1/2024 9:42:00 AM

In order to find your muse, don't stall..Loose Your reins and just scrawl.' Good to read your Lines B J, May you keep going; no value in Errecting an emotionles wall.'

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2024 9:12:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun write. Yes, the muse does run away maybe on a long vacation. Maybe they run off together. Hahaha!!! Have a great/blessed day....................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/29/2024 2:43:00 AM

- Sometimes a little vacation is good, BJ :) - hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 2/28/2024 4:58:00 PM

I deal with the situation found in your poem at some point every week, B.J. I think a lot of us will resonate with your thoughts and poetry, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Silent One

Date: 2/28/2024 12:01:00 PM

We all feel a bit lost without our muse.. I liked how your poem expresses the struggle of balancing the demands of everyday life with the desire for creative expression. The simple yet powerful language conveys a sense of longing and lamentation for the lost connection with the muse, which is central to the poet's ability to create and find meaning in their work... Nicely done

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/28/2024 11:52:00 AM

Hi BJ. Thanks for the visit to my page. I have been struggling a lot lately with my muse taking off on vacation. Well done. :)

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 2/28/2024 11:22:00 AM

Sweet and short!! Seems like after all you and your muse are together again!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2024 10:27:00 AM

I love poetry like this. So easy to read. Not too long and very clever!! a fave,

Valsa George

Date: 2/28/2024 8:06:00 AM

Sometimes we feel that we have lost our muse. When work and domestic obligations take priority, we sideline poetry and I think our muse dislikes it so much that when we call her, she keeps herself away. She likes to be given the prime place in our life. Legros, dear friend, so happy to see you back....

Gary Radice

Date: 2/18/2024 5:18:00 AM

It seems your muse found you BJ with this. I enjoyed the read. Cheers - Gary

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 2/28/2024 1:58:00 AM

Thank you Gary, I think she took the train to other terrain for now though, because again it seems I have been abandoned. It is so nice to hear from you. I was reading others poems tonight, I read your poem about life, and the train 'The Railway Lines', I love that poem so much. Thank you for your visit and encouraging comment. I hope you are well.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/16/2024 12:53:00 AM

Cruel muse. I get an idea when I'm half asleep and then it's lost forever. I do not have the habit of keeping a notebook. Pity

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 2/28/2024 1:51:00 AM

I know what you mean Victor, such obvious mischievousness in the amusement of a muse! I do have that happen too. Probably because we are so busy with life that we don't rest long enough to hear their prompting. I did use to sleep with a notebook and pen nearby and pen things in the dark, that is a good idea to do that again! Thank you for visiting and commenting dear friend. I hope you are well. I'm sorry I am not on here very often anymore, Hopefully I will be soon, at least to read what others are writing, it is always such a peaceful joy to read yours and others poems on here.

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/14/2024 4:11:00 AM

BJ, muses need their rest Seems still you are at your best! My muse naps as well but never fear, you'll wake up one morning fully charged! Happy Valentine's day!!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 2/28/2024 1:46:00 AM

Mike, thank you :) I guess she's resting, hopefully not fled forever. I so hope you're right. I'm waiting for that day I wake up recharged, pen in hand with words flying of the point. Our home has been going through a lot of revamp, and the holidays had us hopping prior to that. I feel like she is gone forever, I guess she won't pardon the mess of a construction site. But the home is getting done, and will be prettier than ever, and maybe that will coax her back, we'll see! I hope you are well my friend. Thank you for your visit and encouragement I so appreciate :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/10/2024 7:00:00 PM

OH, pshaw. Your poem on atmospheric rivers shows me you haven't lost a single beat. Cheers, Gershon

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 2/28/2024 1:36:00 AM

Thank you Gershon, I appreciate your encouraging and always upbeat comments my friend :) Remember two years ago, my 'A Musing Plumber' poem? Well, we are still recoiling from all that, and still getting the home back in order. That Muse of a plumber disappeared as Muses so often do when you don't jump at their bid. We hadn't, and then when we decided we would choose the Muse, he never called back, and the plumbers after him? Wow, they did more than just use a jack hammer. Our home was cut up, re-piped, and then needed repainted. Now the carpet is finally being redone. My Muse doesn't like competing. She has flown the coop! She did drop by for a brief visit, but fleeted on her way again :(

Mat Ignacio

Date: 2/9/2024 8:16:00 PM

seems the muse found its way home with this - well expressed

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 2/28/2024 1:30:00 AM

Thank you Mat, I guess she dropped by for a visit and hurried on her way, she had another plane to catch or something! Hopefully she comes back soon :) I appreciate your visit and comment.