To Laugh Or--- Double Dactyl Contest

Fraggily Grizzily
Vivian Wigglely,
wit in his poems is the
mark of his game.

Some of his words yet weep
vulnerability 
Crying his sorrow, but,
what's with the name!


01/30/2021

Double Dactyl Contest
Hosted by: William Kekaula
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fowler Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Cute James. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Inman Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Thank you, Linda.
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February 5, 2021 at 6:24 PM
James, it’s great to see you posting again. Hope you’re well. And I agree with Laura, a brilliant poem indeed :)
Inman Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Yes, I'm well, thank you for the thought, Akkina. I wish I could spend more time writing and reading but for the moment I do what little I can. Thank you for the nice comment.
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January 31, 2021 at 4:39 PM
What a brilliant poem with a few well chosen lines, James! Really enjoyed this one! Good luck in the contest :)
Inman Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Hi Laura, thank you. I hope if Viv reads this he appreciates the humor. I had to add a syllable to his last name to make it fit the form.
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