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To Feel You In Every Pulse

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I long to be in your endearing presence To drown all my anguish and anxiety In the irresistible lure of your magnetism And to be pulled closer to you by love’s gravity I seek to be in your comforting nearness To feel you in every breath and pulse To peer into the brambles of your dark eyes And cover them with my palms on an impulse I want to be within the radius of your proximity To make you feel how feelings of passion gyrate As the whirl of a current in the depths of my heart That waits to overflow like a river in spate I crave to be lost in your mesmerizing charm To touch, taste and feel the fragrance of love My body warmly snuggled close to you Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove Now soak me in the liquid passion of your heart That impels my spirit to scale new heights Turn my heart into an opening blossom of joy And rock me in happy swings in love’s delights 5. Jan. 2022 Forever My Love Valentine Poetry Contest Sponsor- BJ. Legros Kelley

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/9/2022 1:43:00 AM

Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement in this contest, and thank you so much for being a part of it with the submission of your lovely and romantic poem!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 2/10/2022 5:13:00 PM

Valsa, yes, congratulations on your winning placement. You placed, though not everyone who submitted to the contest did. Third place is a trophy win, I only accepted those in the first three categories. We judge blind, we don't have a clue who submits a poem. This was a difficult contest to judge, the poems are excellent. Also, you are not last, the names are in alphabetical order. Since your name begins with V, the contest generates and sets the winners names in order. So really, congratulations, and thank you for submitting your poem <3

Valsa George
Date: 2/9/2022 4:29:00 AM

Are you congratulating me for being the last? I don't think I deserve to be congratulated ! However thanks .

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/6/2022 4:06:00 PM

Sounds like you might be interested in this Valentino. Or am I overstating it? lol. Sweetness and Light, Gershon

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/6/2022 5:52:00 AM

Beautiful poetry about love! Thanks - Marshall

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/5/2022 1:29:00 PM

Hi! Valsa. This is a lovely romantic poem. I enjoyed reading it. Blessings~ Debra

Valsa George
Date: 1/6/2022 12:19:00 AM

Thanks a lot Debra ! I see you as a nice friend !

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/5/2022 7:15:00 AM

very nicely done, Valsa! Especially liked "the brambles of your dark eyes."

Valsa George
Date: 1/6/2022 12:19:00 AM

Thanks a lot P.S. I enjoy your kind visit to my page .

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/5/2022 6:51:00 AM

Valsa, you've written a poignant poem. You've created a stunning, vibrant image of the ideal love verse for Valentine's Day contest. The flow of this rhythmic, romantic poem was well done.

Valsa George
Date: 1/6/2022 12:15:00 AM

You are quite encouraging Lasaad ! Much grateful to you dear friend !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/5/2022 5:06:00 AM

Enjoyed the flow of this rhythmic, romantic poem, Valsa. Much longing and passion--like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove. Superbly done. Win BIG!

Valsa George
Date: 1/6/2022 12:14:00 AM

Thanks a lot Vijay ! Very glad for your kind words !

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/5/2022 2:33:00 AM

A perfect romantic verse for the valentine contest Valsa. Best of luck. Tom

Valsa George
Date: 1/5/2022 3:58:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your comment and sweet wishes Tom~

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/5/2022 1:49:00 AM

This should be number one in te list of winners. A valentine card that deserves every praise. Every word you wrote spells of love. Best for a win, my friend.

Valsa George
Date: 1/5/2022 3:57:00 AM

You are always an excellent writer of romance. So if you feel my poem is good enough, I am so happy. Thanks a lot dear Victor !