To Feel

I want to feel my whole world burst, see scintillating stars dispersed across a vast unsullied sky the sapphire blue of my mind’s eye when life was fresh and untraversed. I want to jump again. . . headfirst into the ocean, be immersed as passion’s billows multiply. I want to feel! Wake up, my heart! I WANT that thirst, expect the best and not the worst, to have my breath be stopped - to cry for heartbreak’s sake - not stop to sigh with rue that Fate can’t be reversed. . . . I want to feel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 2:10 PM
Wow, awesome, Andrea. A beauty!
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:33 PM
I love it!! I want to jump again...headfirst says it all. Congratulations Andrea
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Smith Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Excellent Andrea, congratulations...
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Congrats Andrea... I want to feel too
A   Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:40 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest Blog "Beautiful, But Fragile" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Richards Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 2:45 PM
What an uplifting and beautiful Rondeau, Andrea. I "feel" it ....each and every line !! :)
Shanmugam Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Congratulations Andrea. .lovely lines:)
Grasso Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. This brings back some deep longings of things lost many year back and were all but forgotten. I really like it. ...Fran
Teagan Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 8:20 PM
Andrea this is an awesome Rondeau! Very beautiful. Thank you for entering my contest!
Gasun Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 5:54 AM
Hi, my dearest friend Andrea! I'm stopping by for a while to enjoy this precious masterpiece of yours. An excellent rondeau giving me an inspiration to try it soon. Thank u thank u soo much for sharing! I'll b back soon to read more. Have a nice weekend! Biggest hugs! love lots always & forever, Leonora
Babcock Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 4:48 PM
Nicely stated in this wonderful poem Andrea. Been a while since i stopped byto read your poetry. soup mail
Garg Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 7:08 AM
The more I read you, the more I become a fan of yours. Congrats.......
Kendrick Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Way to go with this awesome winner..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 7:54 AM
I enjoyed my third read and now add a hearty congratulations!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 4:26 AM
Hi there congrats to you once more Andy love xx
Oyewole Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 11:38 PM
Nicely done, my lady! Congrats on your fine win in the contest!!!
Richards Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 7:51 PM
It is so nice to use the poem of a little known poet....let's hope more will check out this poet's work. In the meantime.....you did it justice with your own!! Congrats to you, Andrea!
May Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea...hugs
Kilmer Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Don't let them fool you. You can always go back. Just don't expect it to be the same. You see life moves in a linear fashion...straight ahead or so it seems. But when you try and break that line into a circle thats when the fun begins because you start breaking physical laws. And only the gifted can do that my dear. ~Kilmer
Devnath  Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 9:57 AM
What is gone, that's gone. Never comes back again except memories. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Crenshaw Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 4:56 PM
I like!! You captured something. And then you made us want it too. 2 thumbs up
Manassian Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 11:13 AM
Andrea....again and again...I'm carried away by the magic of this piece! A rondeau was been beautified by your words...My favorite lines???? GOOD GRIEF...I was going to say the first line...then the second....then...I can't! It is beautiful through and through!!! I love it! Hugs!
Sharma Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 12:14 AM
This is such a fine and lovely piece of poetry:)
Horne Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 3:38 PM
love this powerful write, Andrea. Just how we've all felt at times
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