To everyone I loved so far
Sure, here is the corrected version of the poem:
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To everyone I loved so far:
"Why do people, when they break up, never talk to each other ever again? Like when they just break up to live separately?"
"Why do your crushes hate you after you recover? After you stop loving them? Why did it all end up messy?"
"How should I know?"
"In your inner self, I know you know."
"What? Because I love too much? Because I love to show that I love or care about them? When I love them, everything they do inspires me and I want to show them how important they are."
"That is what makes people uncomfortable."
I sighed.
"It's not my fault that our society can't accept someone giving them love. When they do, they think in one minute it's meant romantically. I've always been a kid sharing love."
"Maybe they felt bad?"
"Bad so they cut off communication? Yup, sure."
Copyright © Adna Demiri | Year Posted 2024
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