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To earn a pardon

Adam and Eve sneaked back to the Garden
Hoping to earn for their sin a pardon
   Eve saw the damn snake
   And began to quake
Snapped snake: "Out of this garden you're barred in."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/14/2019 11:58:00 AM
Hm, a snake, enjoying its solitude in the garden of Eden... IT'S ME! EVE, GO AWAY!!!1111)) P.S.: How does your poetry do it, Wolf? I mean, making me sizzle and squirm with pleasure?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:35:00 PM
It's all because my poetry is so squizzly, I guess. LOL. Thanks, Kurt! :) gw
Date: 8/14/2019 11:27:00 AM
love your imagination and witty writes, they always make me think and often giggle too....nice poem :) hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:34:00 PM
Both are good (thinking and giggling). :) gw
Date: 8/14/2019 3:33:00 AM
So no pardon just a hiss lol.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:33:00 PM
Got it, Tom. ~ gw
Date: 8/13/2019 11:02:00 PM
G'day Gershon … but snakes are deaf Gershon so Eve's in strife still - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:33:00 PM
The snake in the Garden wasn't deaf. He could speak and hear like you and me. Hard to get our arms around now though. :) gw
Date: 8/13/2019 11:00:00 PM
That snake has a snappy line! Funny!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:32:00 PM
It's hisssssss way of communicating! :) gw