Premiere Contest WinnerTo Dreamland On Sunset's Lullaby

To Dreamland on Sunset's Lullaby

Gracefully the young crescent moon
ascends the sky like a cosmic tune;
replacing the drowsy pale yellow sun
sinking on a golden glowing horizon.

To dreamland on a lullaby of silvery twilight...
to dreamland floating with music of night.

Even as shadows of day seek rest,
choirs of songbirds fly home to nest.
But asleep I'll be before stars start to shine;
asleep I'll be before Venus and Mars align.

To dreamland on a lullaby of silvery twilight...
to dreamland floating with music of night.

Melodies of powder-puff pinks and baby blues,
splashed on sunset's orange-tinted hues;
gently I'll slip into a cocoon of sweet slumber,
on the wings of a celestial lullaby so tender.

To dreamland on a lullaby of silvery twilight...
to dreamland floating with music of night.

The trials of day fade gloriously to gray,
and into Sandman's restful arms I will lay.
My restless spirit is calmed from within,
serenaded by nature's soothing violin.

To dreamland on a lullaby of silvery twilight...
to dreamland floating with music of night.


03-23-2018

Contest:      Lullaby in the Sunset
Sponsor:     Vermillion Scythe
Placement:  1st (PoetrySoup Premiere Contest winner)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Devenish Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Pandita, Congratulations on this excellent poem. You posted some comments today for some of my poems but I didn't know how to reply to thank you. So I read a bunch of yours. Your poems are wonderfully descriptive. I need to incorporate that into mine. Cheers Graham
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August 30, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Hi Graham, it is so nice to hear from you. Thank you for leaving your lovely compliment! When you wish to reply to a comment from anyone, click on "Reply" under the comment and type your comment in the box that appears. Have a beautiful day! Best regards. Pandita
Schiavina Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on a superbly written poem.
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July 18, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Hi Frances, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend, and have a beautiful day! Pandita
Smith Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 12:39 AM
Such a beautiful poem Pandita, so lovely and peaceful.
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May 8, 2018 at 6:46 AM
Hi Chantelle, it is such a pleasure to receive your kind praises! Thank you so much! Hugs. Pandita
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Trials of day fade...how lovely... Congrats on great poem
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May 3, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Hi Barbara, it is such a pleasure to receive your kind praises! Thank you so much! Hugs. Pandita
Singh Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 11:24 PM
A gem of a poem indeed !
Sietesantos Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Dear Sushma, I thank you so much and really appreciate your wonderful compliments and support! Hugs. Pandita
Misra Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 9:59 PM
Thank you, Pandita, for taking us on such a soothing journey to the land of Nod. Enjoyed the mellifluous quality of your poem. ~kcm
Sietesantos Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Thank you so much, dear Karam! I really appreciate your wonderful compliments and continued support! Hugs. Pandita
Duncan Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 9:25 PM
Nice ride you take us on :)
Sietesantos Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Hi Debbie, it is so nice to hear from you. Thank you for leaving your lovely compliment! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Inman Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Pandita, when are you going to attach audio of you singing this lovely lyric?
Sietesantos Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Hi James, Hmmmm that is something I should really think about LOL! Thank you, my friend, for praising my work! Have a wonderful day! Pandita
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 6:31 PM
Hello Pandita Sanchez,I hope all is well with you. I felt like I was on a journey just by reading your poem. have a nice evening my friend.
Sietesantos Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Dear Darlene, thank you so much for your superlative compliments which are greatly appreciated! Hugs. Pandita
Peterson Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 6:08 PM
I can’t tell you how pleased I was to read this gentle, lilting rhyme. Just excellent with rhyme so apt yet embedded so as to call no attention to itself. I particularly enjoyed “Even as shadows of day take rest.” I wish I had written that.
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April 26, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Hi Mike, it is such a pleasure to receive your kind praises! Thank you so much! Hugs. Pandita
Quigley Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 11:59 AM
very cool
Sietesantos Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Thank you, Christopher - what a lovely compliment! Hope you are having a great day! Hugs. Pandita
Hamilton Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Amazing verses and with the refrain so lyrical, congrats on your win and being number 1 on the top 100!
Sietesantos Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Hi John, coming from a poet of your caliber, I am so delighted to receive your wonderful complimentary words! Thank you so much and have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Ashley Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 6:31 PM
Oh my dear friend, Pandita, such an enchanting lyric poem! Exquisitely woven and delicate like fine lace, your magnificent poem is serenely captivating. Each stanza builds upon the graceful rhythm and beauty of the one preceding it and your refrain is glorious. Your talent shine like Venus in the night sky.. brilliant! Congratulations on your wondrous trophy win, my lovely friend. Warmest wishes and hugs ~Susan
Peterson Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Amen to all this.
Sietesantos Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Awwwww! Even your compliments read like top notch poetry! Thank you my dear friend, Susan, for your always superlative complimentary words that never cease to uplift my spirits, inspire, and support my work! Thank you - thank you!! Warmest regards and hugs. Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 11:53 PM
I love this serene beauty Pandita! Congratulations on your trophy win! This gem is going into my faves! : ) xxoo
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April 16, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Hi Connie, I am so appreciative of your wonderful compliments. Thank you for your continued support and encouragement, my friend! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Robinson Jr. Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Rainbow bursting love poem, Pandita. A gem of a write ... so lyrical and romantic. I could so lullaby-ing to this every night. Aurora bright poetry. Love and joy always.
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April 11, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Dear Freddie, thank you for your continued encouragement and support which mean so much to me. Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Back with most deserved congrats for a top podium finish, Pandita. Bravo!
Sietesantos Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 6:11 AM
My friend, I appreciate your kind congratulations - thank you so much! Pandita
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Excellent write , Pandita, great imagery and rhyme...Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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April 5, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Thank you so much, dear Eve! I really appreciate your wonderful compliments and support! Hugs. Pandita
May Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 9:10 PM
Beautiful write Pandita..Congrats on your win
Sietesantos Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Dear Joseph, thank you for your continued encouragement and support which mean so much to me. Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
Haight Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Pandita, congratulations on your First Place Trophy win for your beautiful Lyric poem so dreamy and full of imagery! Hugs, Sandra
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April 5, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Hi Sandra, I am so appreciative of your wonderful compliments - such a great encouragement. Thank you for your continued support, my friend! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Poteet Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Accolades on your win and on your great write. I love the repeating lines, they are unifying element to your piece. Enjoyable read.
Sietesantos Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 3:02 PM
I am so appreciative of your wonderful compliments - such a great encouragement. Thank you for stopping by! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Sands Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations for your top win! :)
Sietesantos Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Thank you again for your wonderful supportive words which mean a lot to me! Best wishes always. Pandita
Lindley Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Another shining gem from your golden pen my friend! Exceptional poetry! A fav..
Sietesantos Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Dear Robert, thank you for your continued encouragement and support which mean so much to me. Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
Godwin Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 8:55 AM
This is beautiful, some exquisite imagery conveys the lullaby feel completely. You did a great job - I am impressed. Truly love your contest entry. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Sietesantos Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 11:06 AM
CayCay, I am so appreciative of your wonderful compliments - such a great encouragement. Thank you for your continued support, my friend! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Oh wow... I feel sleepy now... so mellow and so peaceful...
Sietesantos Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:06 PM
What a lovely compliment - thank you SO, that means a lot coming from you! Have a nice restful weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Babbit Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Truly well done, the subtle music of the night's delight.
Sietesantos Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! I really appreciate your wonderful compliments and support! Hugs. Pandita
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