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Pale and fair, she will sit awhile 
She's a fragile lily, but not a child
who climbs across the wooden stile
to seek her private solitude

The willow pond, is her second home
She'll while away these lonely hours
with dragonflies, and buttercups,
mossy stones, and fragrant flowers

She picks bouquets of hufflewinks
 of yellow, blue, and blushing pink
Then adds a cattail to the mix
with baby's breath, and bright tulips

Deep in her magic dreamer's trance 
Pretending that there is a prince
who'll save her from a Dragon's wrath
He'll sweep her up and steal a kiss
together they will ride in bliss

Trees sway and swoon along the bank
Reminding her of restless winds
and that love is fleeting as a breeze
Trees lose their leaves, and dreams will fade

She listens, for the sound of hoofs
O'er twig and stone, her eyes are keen
Yet, not a prince, nor stead is seen
Where tangled grass and willows lean
 
As if a lily, but not the child
who seeks her private solitude
She comes to dream a little while
then climbs across the wooden stile
to leave the dream among the fronds
at the quiet Willow Pond


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6/4/18 
Dragons, Dragonflies, And Huffle-Winks Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/26/2018 11:15:00 PM
Back again with another comment on this one. This is a beautiful poem, a gorgeous poem, really. It's got a recurring theme, a recurring leitmotif, imagery, rhythm flow, message --- in short, everything anyone could want in a poem. Checking the contest, I see that it didn't place. Go figure. In my book, that doesn't detract one iota from the value, the worth, the eloquence and elegance of this remarkable write. Bravo! ~ gw
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/27/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for this beautiful compliment !!!
Date: 6/25/2018 5:18:00 PM
Dreamy poem, Carrie. Soupmail.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/27/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you again, Agnes,.......and also for catching my typo ! It helps to have another eye!! :)
Date: 6/21/2018 4:01:00 PM
My youngest daughter just met her Prince who has told her she is his gift. Your lovely poem infers that dreams can still come true as they have for my Michelle. Fantasy can become reality and I adore this poem Carrie. Nature inspires our dreams. Beautiful! xxoo
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Date: 6/17/2018 10:29:00 PM
Delicate, delicious delicacy -- so well-conceived and executed, Carrie. A winner in my book! :) gw
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:06:00 AM
A lovely poetic fantasy, Carrie Reads like a winner!
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Date: 6/5/2018 6:02:00 PM
a beautiful entry for her contest, Carrie! Nicely rhymed.
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