To Dream Or Not

I came home late and went to bed,
pulled the cover over my head.

As I lay drifting off to sleep,
my mind’s thoughts went too deep. 

My eyes came open but I could not shift,
my body tranced, paralysis was swift.  

I felt the bed sink as I lay prone,
but no one was there, I was alone. 

As I laid there too scared to cry,
I thought for sure that I would die.

The weight of a body laid on mine,
feeling stress on my legs and spine.
 
I could not move, even vocalize,
I knew my mind had to focalize.

I laid there thinking it was just a dream,
I had to except it, I could not scream.

Ten years passed when the next dream occurred,
to others, this dream was quite absurd.

Again I was lying prone but asleep,
awoke when my neck felt a figure creep.

I shrugged my shoulders to make it cease,
managed to say; stop, give me some peace.

For years I have been free from this nightmare,
that left me loath sleep and dreading the scare.

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey  

Seventh Place Winner ~ "A Fragmented Dream” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance~A Rambling Poet
Oct. 4, 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/11/2010 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations Caryl on your win in Constance ~A Rambling Poet's contest "A Fragmented Dream~~. Love Carol
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Date: 9/11/2010 10:08:00 AM
fanatastic. you had me! thank you, chuck
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Date: 9/11/2010 12:03:00 AM
congrats Caryl, enjoyed this scary poem of yours. Harry
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:42:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in the Dream contest... an awesome write .. enjoy your special win this happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:10:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest and congrats on overcoming the Sleep paralysis. There's a whole wiki about it if you're interested.
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Caryl
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Date: 9/10/2010 12:31:00 PM
Caryl quite an intriguing write to have it occur again must have left you with so many questions.. Best of luck for the contest :) Wilma
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:52:00 AM
Caryl, there has to be a reason this dream repeated. Very frightening! Do you think it could have been a memory from a past life? Very intrigued by this powerful write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:37:00 AM
I'd be afraid to sleep if I had nightmares like this one. Very scary! Thanks for your comments and good luck in the contest.
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