To Dirty Soles

that never seem to get clean
even as I scrub you with gravel and
spittle you daily with complaints

you are content to knead the dirt
rejoice in it even every step
a sloppy kiss to newton

who ignored you
and courted an apple

but no matter these skies
of reaching hands and gaping mouths
it suffices to remember
they once joyously suckled on

you were love bathed softly
after the long dusty road
and sweetened with oil

I won't forget the old ways soles
held the string as we swept the sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 7, 2009 at 10:39 AM
Glad you like the Blacksmith's Bellows. Thanks so much for the corrects too check if I got them all? The poem above could take a few gramatical tweets too ;).Line 1 repeat the title (nod) Line 3 bring spittle up to this line; Line 4 you (still) daily complain. I bekieve yiou wished the reader to use soul/sole interchangeabily? Great concept! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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