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Foggily out of cryostasis, I come ...

A slow, painful waking to a vessel that's shaking
         from the stress of its increasing mass,
And at once I'm made sure that it's all premature,
         for I should yet be sleeping, and fast.

Why I'm not still deep in my long cryo-sleep,
       is a troubling notion, indeed,
For it's a century's span to the world where we plan
       to propagate our human seed.

The cryo's defect is a slow reconnect,
       with my senses still frozen and bare,
Yet I'll need all devices to discover the crisis,
       and keep safe the lives in my care.

I fight what's still left of the cryopod's deft
       reduction of all that I'm feeling,
Grab food from the fridge, stumble off to the bridge,
       the emergency sirens still pealing.

I at once raise the shield from the ship's forward field,
       and I stare straight ahead at what's wrong,
A bright purple spark in a nebula, dark,
       that is almost a full parsec long!

The shapes and the colors remind me of Mueller's
       "Two Girls" and his fine Gypsy lasses,
Lush watercolor hues of soft greens and blues,
       all the products of eddying gases.

It is beautiful, yes, but I do not need guess
       what the center is, blackened as coal,
What no light can pass through - SINGULARITY, true,
       and one that could swallow us whole.

Too fast is our rate, we can NOT navigate
       'round the nebulous dark that's our curse,
And our increasing mass is now too much to pass
       by a course we might safely traverse.

I consider, a piece, we might try to increase
       the reaction at the core of our drive,
But with more anti-matter, we are apt to just splatter
       in a vortex we will not survive.

If we had greater distance, or added resistance,
       we might slow and alter our course,
But we're much too near to the black hole to veer,
       and being pulled in by its force.

The process, one-sided, baryogenesis, provided,
       makes our now futile spot very dire,
And without the ship slowing, we are quickly now going
       from the frying pan into the fire.

We must not stay pointed on this bearing anointed,
       or we'll soon meet our end there in space,
Yet we can not slow down, or change course to go 'round
       the black hole that now stares in our face.

Big on heroes, I'm not, but we DO have a shot,
       though a slim one, I have to admit,
I would use, (beg the term), a thing called a "worm"-
       hole, if our increased mass will permit.

I pour three libations and jot calculations
       required for bending the void,
Then toss back each one, toasting daughters and son,
       and the ship that I'll apt leave destroyed.

I bless the crew's slumbers and input the numbers,
       hesitating at "Enter" a smidge,
And breathing a sigh, (whilst I cover one eye),
       I launch the command from the bridge ...

       ... BOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!

Well ... what happens next has left me perplexed,
       as I'm not on the ship, nor with crew,
But it must've gone well, cuz I'm still here to tell
       YOU the story ... now isn't that true?

I'm not on the lam, but just where I AM,
       is the puzzle I'm working on now,
For without ship and crew there's not much I can do,
       but try to get homeward, somehow.

Deep space, can I span it from here on this planet?
       (Though it seems to be one I can roam) ...
Ah yes, now, if only I weren't so damn lonely,
       for the blue marble that I call ...

       ... HOME.





~ 3rd Place ~  in the "Jump" Poetry Contest, Sheri Fresonke Harper, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/24/2020 2:29:00 PM
This is absolutely stunning, Greg. It would make a great movie. I wrote something similar called Space Walk. Take a look & tell me what you think.
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Date: 1/25/2020 10:32:00 PM
Greg, this is EPIC! I thoroughly enjoyed riding with you through that black hole. Congrats on your placement and on the great balance of poetry and science you accomplished here! To Infinity And Beyond! Cheers ~ John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/26/2020 5:12:00 AM
Thank you so very much, John, that is so appreciated - I'm really happy that you found some enjoyment in this little "quantum leap" verse - I had fun with this one. Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 1/24/2020 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations Gregory, for your third place win in the "Jump" contest. I loved the trip into outer space and waking up from deep sleep, good story poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for entering.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/26/2020 5:10:00 AM
Thank you SO much, Sheri, I am really pleased that you found this worthy of placement ... I know sci-fi isn't big here so one always takes a chance entering contests with it, but thankfully they're appreciated for other elements if not a favorite genre. Blessings, Friend! :o) <3
Date: 1/17/2020 9:22:00 PM
Really well done, Greg. Great blend of craftmanship and science story-telling. That's my kind of story. But you knew that. Best -- Eric
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Eric Cohen
Date: 1/27/2020 10:48:00 PM
This may be old news for you: https://futurism.com/neoscope/4-scientists-have-found-a-way-to-rapidly-thaw-cryopreserved-tissue-without-damage2030
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/26/2020 5:08:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Eric, - was hoping you might see this one, as I had a bit of basic QM fun with it, (I may extend the story a bit sometime). Glad you enjoyed it, my friend! :o)
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