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Isn't she gorgeous? I got this pic from Google images. All our avatars are there. I hope you don't mind, Charmaine.

To Charmaine

There was a girl named Charmaine
So sweet, not one to complain
Her words did ignite
Put flames in the night
Her rhymes are pretty not plain

Her use of each metaphor
Will lead to visions galore
Like honey and cream
They sweeten each dream
That’s why her rhymes we adore

She writes with class and finesse
Each line has her sweet caress
She flirts with the moon
And makes poets swoon
Her heart is sweet, I confess

So, Girl…here’s looking at you
You bring us visions brand new 
Your words are sublime
They have a sweet chime
For you're are a poet so true

Eileen Manassian

I’m blessed to call Charmaine a friend. I adore her heart and her spirit. She doesn’t have a shadow of malice in her sweet character. Her poetry is of the finest…and yet she is so humble about it. This was inspired by her latest poem….I Think of You. It is just…..sublime. I truly can’t do it justice. Love you, Charmaine….I truly do!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Oh but I missed this! You rock, both of you, Eileen and Charmaine. 7. Hugs and smiles, Kim :D
Meade Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 8:43 PM
LO this is a beautiful tribute -- it demonstrates the wonderful love between two friends . . . to love and to be loved. I have imaged Charma in a dark room, her baby asleep typing away envisioning a moon lighted bench . . . love waves lapping the shore . . . both of you have passionate hearts and a committed love for others. Much love and light to both of you. 7
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 3:31 PM
What a delightful tribute in Limerick form, Eileen! Charm is pure charm and she attracts by her lovely and humble character; her poetry is beautifully romantic. Well done for a charming write!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 8:54 AM
I add my voice to the praises, she is indeed a lovely and talented lady!
Manassian Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 11:31 PM
:) Thank you, Richard. I know her poetry has inspired you to write as well. I appreciate the visit.
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Charmaine is charming/smile disarming/ A smell of thyme in poetry soup/ She is as fresh as a cantaloupe.. Lovely tribute to a lovely poet. Love you Charm...Thank you Wondera. God bless>>>>rajat
Manassian Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 11:32 PM
What a lovely poem, Rajat. :) Charmaine deserves this. Thank you....Hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 7:28 AM
No question that Charmaine is great/ This with certainty I can state/ But you my dear Eileen/ A lovely lady have been/ All know, you have never been a fake!
Manassian Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 11:34 PM
Your post makes my heart sing. Efkharisto, Demetri. Esai toso kala mazi mou. Then exo logia....Filakia...gia sena.
Bordner Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 3:45 AM
Charma, a woman of smooth drama...her face glows seductive grace, her eyes make passion rise...lips, to good to be rude...her poetry she saunters sweet, be what makes a learned Lady complete..."She flirts with the moon and makes poets swoon..." a lovely tribute Eileen...J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 5:15 AM
A beautiful description of Charmaine, as only you can do, Justin. Yes...she is all that. Thank you for your visit to my work. Sorry I didn't respond sooner. I go to church on Saturdays....It's my holy day. I spoke this morning....showed a power point presentation...The theme? Don't Judge. One of the slides had a quote that went like this: Don't judge me because I sin differently than you do. Ah....we are all sinners anonymous. That's my understanding, anyway. Getting ready to go to my brother's for lunch. Thank you for the visit. I hope you are well.
Nance Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 4:18 PM
She is a sweetie, wonderful write for our wonderful friend.
Manassian Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Thanks, Cas. Charmaine showed real love to me when the news of the war and the danger here became apparent to her. She offered me shelter should I have to escape. I'll never forget that. Thanksk for your visit, Sweetie. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Ahh!! Great work honoring Charmaine..I enjoyed reading your Limericks..They are not so easy to write but you made it seem effortless..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Manassian Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 3:32 PM
:) Welcome, Sara. Glad you liked this piece. Hugs
Chircop Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Cherry on the cake i meant below..xx..My reply space is giving me trouble that is why im addinfg this in a new comment.Re gorgeous,The lady i see gorgeous is the one in your avatar..Its you.Re myself,If you see me when I wake up,My hair is so big : ) like tina turner's at her best,so gorgeous is too much for this simple island girl,but you are a good friend so that iwhy you see me that way..: ).Tnks for makung my day : )
Manassian Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 3:10 PM
:) :) :) I chose my favorite picture of you!!! So pretty you are...inside and out!
Chircop Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 2:59 PM
awawawawawaw...Blush!Blush : )Oh I. really don't know how to thankyou for this adorable write.You are not only one of my fav poets,or friends but a soul sister.Thanks so much,you lifted my spirits and I needed it.I was having heart pain ;but it turned out to be I have a strained muscle,acid and a bit of stress,so U was relieved to know it wasnt serious.This is the cherry on the caje : )A fav.Of course : )Hugs xx
Manassian Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Sweetie...your wellbeing is vital to me. I do love you....as all those things you mentioned. I'm so glad that you are well....Please, do take care of yourself! XOXOXO. I don't mean to be superfluous, Charmaine, but honestly....I don't think you know the beauty of your writes. They are enchanting....saying so much with such amazing imagery! I love the imagery! :) Take care, my sweet. GOD BLESS YOU!!!!
Fleming Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 2:42 PM
Very nice tribute, Eileen. And lets not forget the verses within the poem...it is all rather good! Nicely penned. :) john.
Manassian Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Thank you, John. I'm glad you found this to your liking. I've written a limerick or two before....Not the easiest form to work with, but my content made it easier for me! Charmaine is a lovely person. Thanks for the visit.
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 2:33 PM
Fabulous tribute Eileen.... Yes she makes this poet swoon with her sweet flowing words and her humble giving soul...a fav....hugs Tim
Manassian Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 2:35 PM
That I know, Tim. :) Yes, she is just a fabulous woman, and I do love her dearly. Her happiness makes my heart happy! :) Thanks for the visit, my friend.
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