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To Become One

To become one Even if moonlight is broken and wild flowers wilt beneath a stolen sun lost in a twilight song, sung in off key silhouettes along a choral reef drenched in caramel pages of forgotten ink... amidst an ocean’s marathon, waving to popsicle patrons, melting your heart in every sweetness now clinging to shirt tails of written directions leading away Even if they take your hand in cotton candy promises and merry-go-round whispers, those of endless phrases of love’s poetic mist gathering about your eyes, enticing your smile as if they are owed it… hear my pleas in truthful cries, teardrop wishes flowing steadfast feelings, beyond any rose petal stanzas or peppermint verses of unfelt meanings in penned deception luring you… and walk with me, so I may show you a place among the hidden forests and daffodil daydreams, where you will know my love is real, where affection’s map leads to a wondrous treasure of happiness, where the moon and stars dance pirouettes in tempo with our hearts… where we may invite eternity to become one… with us Good night Soupers Have a great weekend See you again on Monday

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Date: 1/14/2018 9:18:00 AM
Love the imagery. Awesome poem, Chris.
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Date: 4/17/2017 10:45:00 PM
Very beautifully written good night, romantic, wonderful love poem Chris!:) I truly enjoy reading this one and so many others from you.A 7 +! A fav too. And for sure I'll be coming back to continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry.And thanks again n' again for visiting my pages yesterday, I deeply appreciate so much your very kind support and all my friend:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)) D.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 3/5/2017 8:43:00 AM
- A poetic beautiful poem, enjoy reading Chris - Happy Sunday ... "See you again on Monday" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise so much for always being so nice to me. I truly appreciate your visits to my poetry
Date: 3/4/2017 4:32:00 AM
Chris, it has been an honor this morning to read your poetic entry because it is poetic. I am in awe of its beauty and your skill. Honestly. There is beauty and poetry in its entirety including the poetic title. As it is morning and not night we readers (Soupers) say to you Good Morning and may your hand and pen be guided always.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lisa for your kindness and encouraging comments this morning. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 3/4/2017 2:45:00 AM
An overflowed river of emotions and images that lead to the falls of poetic Splendor dear, Chris! A seven.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thanks so much my poetic friend, your comment is poetry to me.
Date: 3/3/2017 9:58:00 PM
You didn't leave any imagery unused for anyone else. This is a WOW, not a syllable that isn't awesome and worthy of a poetic embrace. Wow again ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2017 8:49:00 AM
Not even one syllable? :) Thank you CayCay for your wonderful comment on my poem. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 3/3/2017 6:03:00 PM
Wow, now this is a favorite. And..Actions from the heart surely overpower the words. You have written this beautifully with a perfect ending. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi for your beautiful thoughts concerning my poem. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 3/3/2017 5:59:00 PM
Oh Chris...One will always feel it when its more than words..When feeling is as deep as the emotion..and when affection whispers love..A fave..So beautiful...Im glad I cant sleep..Got to read such endearing poems tonight.Goodnight &Happy Weekend..Charma.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend for always being so kind to me. I appreciate you visits and to my poetry.

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