To Be Uncool

A child – once solitary - 
 lived inside herself and always dreamed.
She wished for popularity.
This would be happiness – at least for her it seemed.

Popularity never came,
but in her thirteenth year,
she noticed others like herself -
girls seeking more. Like her, they were sincere.

She sought them out – those other girls
unwanted by the cliques at school.
She and they were interesting.
Fun were they! It mattered not to be “uncool!”

United, they made room for other girls.
Enjoying each other, a common motto was their creed:
“One for all and all for one,”
Interconnectedness was true friendship indeed.

Dec. 4, 2022
For Unseeking Seeker's  Journey Without Movement Poetry Contest
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Thomas Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 7:50 PM
I like this Andie, I wish this was the case at my school; it would have been nice not to have been alone during those years... I like this :)
Maverick Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Hello cool one.' I read of self experience right Off, discarded that 'spurious thought' and then Read your reply to the redoutable Harry btw All blessings Harry.' So Andrea well conveyed To I as a reader.' I also like the contest idea of U S.'
Horsman Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 6:54 PM
From you so different, Andrea, love the poem, in a way it talks of not only today, but yesterday...
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 10:08 PM
It's the story of my youth, harry.
Hawley Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 6:49 PM
I am trying to wrap my head around this one. Well, at least in the way of how it relates to topic of Journey Without Movement. It took me reading it slow to understand the girl you are talking about was me, only like at age 19-24age range. Cheers!
Hawley Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 2:38 AM
What I was thinking about writing was about the caption of a ship that is inside a bottle on someone's living room mantle.
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 10:12 PM
I could not conceive of what that contest was actually about. Obviously the sponsor realized that too, since I got N/A. haha
Poet Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 5:40 PM
Your perspective on the topic is quite interesting, Andrea. Absolutely, the sense of belonging and continuity fostered by this interdependence is both attractive and enduring.
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 10:12 PM
Thanks, my friend.
Parker Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 1:28 PM
High school life is enormously overrated, AD. 4 years in semi-shadows, fifty years bathed in illumination. Nice piece. Good luck. ~;o)
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 10:12 PM
Yes, that is for sure!
Gauthier Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 7:37 AM
very sweet ~
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 3:24 AM
Yes, the interconnectedness is very inviting and long lasting. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara ..soupmail soon.
Daniel Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 8:28 PM
A great take on the theme, Andrea:)
Gregory Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 8:25 PM
It's amazing to find interesting things about yourself and then opening u to like mindedness. As before the theme effortlessly shine a beam into the human journey...nicely done.
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 10:13 PM
i think you got me, Weston, thanks
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