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Submitted for "Your Favorite # 6" Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Seth Pina. Date written: 06/25/2026

To Be Loved - POTD

To be loved
is to be a wildflower
blooming in springtime. 
How wondrous to be much desired
by all the honeybees in the meadow. 
There's no greater wealth on all of earth.
That feeling,
that inexplicable feeling
is like being all wrapped up
in warm satin sheets. 
Oh, what a thrill it is
to be loved, unconditionally.
It's like being sung to all at once 
by the robins of the universe;
words can't possibly describe it.
Is it crazy to imagine 
it feels like a walk across 
heaven's pearly gates?
Is it but the loveliest of dreams 
one would rather die
than awake from?
Oh, I bet it is.
I know this much is true,
it's heavenly to be loved 
by you.


Poem of The Day on 03/09/2021
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Alex Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 11:27 PM
"a walk across heaven's pearly gates?" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Radice Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations Edward on your contest placement. You've put your romantic soul into this piece and it just oozes love. Cheers - Gary
Ibeh Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Thank you very much, Gary:-)
George Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 10:33 PM
Love is the noblest of passions human mind has ever come to experience. You have exemplified love between two hearts in the most beautiful way. It is 'like being all wrapped up in warm satin sheets'! Oh what comfy feeling ! Congratulations on your great win, Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 11:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Valsa;-)
Watt Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 4:07 PM
Edward, your imagery is fantastic and your elation with being loved unconditionally is spot on. There truly is nothing like it. Congrats on your marathon win ~ John
Ibeh Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 11:01 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely comments and visit, John;-)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 12:59 PM
Back with "Congratulations" on this New win. "Lovely" Have a great/blessed day..............
Ibeh Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 11:02 PM
Thanks for the revisit and congrats, Paula:-)
Toney Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 12:28 PM
"How wondrous to be much desired by all the honeybees in the meadow" and "sung to all at once by the robins of the universe"! Edward, this is so fresh, fun, and real! Congratulations on your win on Mile 6 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 7 has already started!
Ibeh Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 11:04 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, the feedback, and the visit, Mark;-)
Agustin Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 10:22 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
Ibeh Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 4:20 AM
Thank you, Beata:-) God bless you, too.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 3:12 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely/wonderful-story/write and picture. Have a great/blessed day..............
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Thank you so much, Paula:-)
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Such a beautiful romantic piece, Many congrats on your win Edward:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Thanks very much, Jan:-)
Ashley Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Dear Edward, congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest with this exquisite expression of love. Romantic magic spills from your gifted pen, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:17 PM
Thank you very much, Susan:-)
Kauffman Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win with this exquisitely romantic poem of love - "wonderous to be much desired by all the honeybees in the meadow."
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Thank you so much, Sam:-)
Y. Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Hi Edward, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:19 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis:-)
Hankins Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Edward, this is a beautiful poem, and I can see why it is your favorite. I am so happy it ranked high in my contest, and has become one of my favorites! Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, the wonderful visit and comment, Milt:-)
Peck Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 9:32 AM
To be loved unconditionally. A beautiful feeling. And to be in love - so wonderful! A lovely poem.
Ibeh Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 2:59 PM
Thank you very much, Ann:-) Have a blessed Easter!
Kaufman Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Oh Mr. Edward, I sOOH enjoyed this tribute to true love. You are definitely one of the lucky ones out there. Congratulations on your win.
Ibeh Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 8:49 AM
Thank you very much for your wonderful visit, Nancy;-)
Gelok Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 4:02 PM
I'm pretty new to this and was pleasantly surprised to see a video too. And yes, it's wonderful to be loved. Thanks for the great read.
Ibeh Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful visit and comment, Virginia:-)
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Lovely poem, Edward ~ well penned
Ibeh Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 1:14 PM
Thank you so much, Line:-)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 12:11 PM
"Oh, what a thrill it is to be loved, unconditionally. It's like being sung to all at once by the robins of the universe; words can't possibly describe it." Wow! Wonderfully done. Congratulations on POTD
Ibeh Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and congrats, Caren:-) God bless.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 6:52 AM
"Is it but the loveliest of dreams one would rather die than awake from?" - memorable line. A beautiful poem, Dear Poet. Congratulations on POTD. Well-deserved ~ Mala
Ibeh Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Mala:-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 7:45 AM
This is wonderful Edward. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
Ibeh Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Thank you, Maureen:-) Most appreciated.
Pandit Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Congrats again, Edward, for reaching the top tier of best poems. I predict soon to be #1.
Ibeh Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 3:04 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-) Most appreciated.
Gelok Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 8:12 PM
I love LOVE POEMS, and this was amazing. Thanks
Ibeh Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 8:38 PM
Thank you so much, Virginia:-)
Wolf Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 7:01 PM
May the thrill never be gone, Edward! Belated congrats on POTD, gw
Ibeh Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 7:08 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon:-)
Leiser Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 1:34 PM
Beautiful words, Edward, and congrats on POTD!!
Ibeh Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thank you very much, Laura:-) Most obliged.
Awtry Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 6:18 AM
This is beautiful! Congratulations on POTD :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Thank you very much, P.S.:-)
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