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" MAN AND LIFE" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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When Heaven's plans for Man were prepared Man insisted he to be free His future asked himself to handle From then into eternity As millennia though have passed by Man proved incapable to be His own happiness to realize Without divinity's decree For that a choice is now asked to make If he desires long to exist All of heavens' commands to obey Otherwise he will be dismissed! © Demetrios Trifiatis 28 January 2018 * I would like to thank PS and all my friends for honoring this poem as POTD!

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FJ Thomas

Date: 3/7/2018 3:55:00 PM

So very true. A beauty as always dear Demetrios.

Donna Loughman

Date: 2/9/2018 9:28:00 AM

This is excellent...Sorry I missed it until now...congratulations on POTD! Donna

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/4/2018 3:45:00 AM

Good one Demetrios. And so we roll on try to live the promise. Many wishes and bless you. Kai

Judith S

Date: 2/1/2018 4:23:00 AM

Belated congratulations, Demetrios, on your well deserved POTD (belated)honor! ~Judy

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 1/31/2018 4:07:00 AM

I will say this is but a beauty. The poem is sooo wonderful. Thanks for sharing sir! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2018 1:03:00 PM

- I would like to thank you for writing this poem, dear friend - A beautiful poem that deserves all glory - Congratulations with p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming

Date: 1/30/2018 10:44:00 AM

And a goodly poem it is too, Demetrios! Your little poem provides "food for thought". My very best, regards. :) john P.s Congratulations on POTD.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/30/2018 10:44:00 AM

Way to go Demetrios, congratulations for POTD honors...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/30/2018 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on having this lovely poem honored as POTD Demetrios! : )

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/30/2018 9:01:00 AM

You are a beautiful writer! Congratulations!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/30/2018 7:54:00 AM

Congratulation Demetrios for POTD, well deserved. Regards Tom

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/30/2018 7:23:00 AM

Wonderful potd! Congratulations dear Demetrios :) A lovely day to you! xomo

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/30/2018 7:13:00 AM

Congratulations dear Demetrios for your well deserved POTD honors for your compelling, meaningful and beautifully expressed poem. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Maria Williams

Date: 1/30/2018 6:38:00 AM

Hey! my dearest friend, It is such pleasure to see you being awarded this much deserved honor. Congrats on the POTD...Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/30/2018 6:54:00 AM

Thank you once more dearest, Maria! XXX

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/30/2018 5:43:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, Demetrios..glad to see you in this space!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/30/2018 6:21:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay, my friend!

Silent One

Date: 1/30/2018 5:29:00 AM

Congrats on POTD my friend..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/30/2018 6:23:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One!

Maria Williams

Date: 1/29/2018 11:19:00 PM

When man, metaphorically speaking, unplugs himself from the source he is alone and without power. We should always remain connected my dearest friend. A very profound poem... Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/30/2018 6:20:00 AM

Thank you, Maria! XXX

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/28/2018 7:01:00 PM

I pray he would overcome worshiping his source of creation...A nice little story...All the best Demetrious

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/29/2018 1:14:00 AM

How can you pray my friend, Arturo, at the moment at which you "pray" Man to stop worshiping the source of his Creation? If Man stop praying to God , to whom is going to pray? To himself? Now... my nice little story carries an important big message for those willing to pray to the source of their Creation. God bless you my friend. Thank you for taking the time to comment so you gave me the opportunity to defend my source of creation!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2018 1:51:00 PM

- Some believe in the free will because they have not understood what the faith is - Lovely written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/30/2018 6:19:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/28/2018 6:58:00 AM

Words of wisdom my friend..a lesson for us all..well written, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/30/2018 6:19:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/28/2018 3:20:00 AM