Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Light Verse

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" MAN AND LIFE" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

To Be Dismissed

When Heaven's plans for Man were prepared

Man insisted he to be free

His future asked himself to handle

From then into eternity



As millennia though have passed by

Man proved incapable to be

His own happiness to realize

Without divinity's decree



For that a choice is now asked to make

If he desires long to exist

All of heavens' commands to obey

Otherwise he will be dismissed!  
                       





© Demetrios Trifiatis
     28 January 2018

* I would like to thank PS and all my friends for honoring this poem
 as POTD!

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FJ Thomas March 7, 2018 at 3:55 PM So very true. A beauty as always dear Demetrios.

Donna Loughman February 9, 2018 at 9:28 AM This is excellent...Sorry I missed it until now...congratulations on POTD! Donna

Kai Michael Neumann February 4, 2018 at 3:45 AM Good one Demetrios. And so we roll on try to live the promise. Many wishes and bless you. Kai

Judith S February 1, 2018 at 4:23 AM Belated congratulations, Demetrios, on your well deserved POTD (belated)honor! ~Judy

Afolabi Muideen January 31, 2018 at 4:07 AM I will say this is but a beauty. The poem is sooo wonderful. Thanks for sharing sir! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2018 at 1:03 PM - I would like to thank you for writing this poem, dear friend - A beautiful poem that deserves all glory - Congratulations with p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming January 30, 2018 at 10:44 AM And a goodly poem it is too, Demetrios! Your little poem provides "food for thought". My very best, regards. :) john P.s Congratulations on POTD.

Charlie Smith January 30, 2018 at 10:44 AM Way to go Demetrios, congratulations for POTD honors...

Connie Marcum Wong January 30, 2018 at 9:56 AM Congratulations on having this lovely poem honored as POTD Demetrios! : )

Sunlite Wanter January 30, 2018 at 9:01 AM You are a beautiful writer! Congratulations!

Tom Cunningham January 30, 2018 at 7:54 AM Congratulation Demetrios for POTD, well deserved. Regards Tom

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 30, 2018 at 7:23 AM Wonderful potd! Congratulations dear Demetrios :) A lovely day to you! xomo

Susan Ashley January 30, 2018 at 7:13 AM Congratulations dear Demetrios for your well deserved POTD honors for your compelling, meaningful and beautifully expressed poem. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Maria Williams January 30, 2018 at 6:38 AM Hey! my dearest friend, It is such pleasure to see you being awarded this much deserved honor. Congrats on the POTD...Maria xxx Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2018 at 6:54 AM Thank you once more dearest, Maria! XXX

Vijay Pandit January 30, 2018 at 5:43 AM Congrats on POTD, Demetrios..glad to see you in this space! Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2018 at 6:21 AM Thank you, Vijay, my friend!

Silent One January 30, 2018 at 5:29 AM Congrats on POTD my friend.. Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2018 at 6:23 AM Thank you, Silent One!

Maria Williams January 29, 2018 at 11:19 PM When man, metaphorically speaking, unplugs himself from the source he is alone and without power. We should always remain connected my dearest friend. A very profound poem... Maria xxx Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2018 at 6:20 AM Thank you, Maria! XXX

Arturo Michael January 28, 2018 at 7:01 PM I pray he would overcome worshiping his source of creation...A nice little story...All the best Demetrious Demetrios Trifiatis January 29, 2018 at 1:14 AM How can you pray my friend, Arturo, at the moment at which you "pray" Man to stop worshiping the source of his Creation? If Man stop praying to God , to whom is going to pray? To himself? Now... my nice little story carries an important big message for those willing to pray to the source of their Creation. God bless you my friend. Thank you for taking the time to comment so you gave me the opportunity to defend my source of creation!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2018 at 1:51 PM - Some believe in the free will because they have not understood what the faith is - Lovely written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2018 at 6:19 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs

Vijay Pandit January 28, 2018 at 6:58 AM Words of wisdom my friend..a lesson for us all..well written, Demetrios. Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2018 at 6:19 AM Thank you, Vijay!

Tom Cunningham January 28, 2018 at 3:20 AM Beautiful words for a Sunday morning Demetrios. And if everyone lived by his teachings how happier we would all be. Regards Tom Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2018 at 6:18 AM Thank you, Tom!