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in my garden towards the East, the honey bees have built a hive, where human traffic is the least, their busy low hum comes alive. swishing across my garden plot, in one and twos for the nectar, then hum their way back to their spot, to fill the queen bee’s honey jar! the white lily pond to my right, is water for their enterprise, they stop to drink between a flight, just a small droplet for their size! at times they fly to acer tree, where ladybirds have bamboo nest, perhaps leisure and they are free, have queen’s permission for a rest! they truly know my garden well, like driver of a taxi hire, from honey suckle to blue bell, visit the flowers they desire! snow drops to yellow daffodils, from tender fox gloves to sweet pea, they are at their unceasing skills, serving mankind without a fee! little birds, nest near the rose bush, in a wall of plants over fence, flying past the bees in their rush, living peacefully like good friends! I watch them all day from my chair, from under the shade of Oak tree, they either know or just don’t care, that men can laze as much as me! Placement 2nd Written 29/07/2020 petal, buds, blossoms,bees,birds poetry contest Sponsor Silent one

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Date: 8/3/2020 5:31:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoy your musings Krish sir. Such brilliantly you portray your wise thoughts.:-) And most importantly I always love your clever titles :-) For a short moment I sat in the beside you in a chair observing the tiny bees.It was a wonderful sight.I enjoyed it:-) Congratulations on your wonderful win.Keep inspiring and glowing with your golden words. Best wishes to you..
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Date: 8/3/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thanks Deepa. Happy it was to your liking. That is the idea of a poem, to share a view or an idea in simple words! Thanks for your kind words!
Date: 8/2/2020 1:13:00 AM
You are lucky to observe these magnficent images in your garden. I am sure it would be interesting to breathe in the scenery. Your muse paints a gorgeous picture Krish. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/2/2020 1:27:00 AM
Thanks Aditi! You are welcome to my Garden! And thanks for letting us into your beautiful garden of imagination! We enjoy your poetry! :)
Date: 8/1/2020 12:24:00 PM
- Congratulations ... I knew this was a top win, Krish :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/1/2020 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Anne. Pleased to have your encouragement and support.
Date: 8/1/2020 9:28:00 AM
Krish, great imagery and theme. Congratulations on your win in Silent Ones contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/1/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. Always an honour to be read and appreciated! Kind regards Krish
Date: 8/1/2020 8:05:00 AM
Your poem rhymes and flows very well, whilst describing your garden perfectly.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/1/2020 9:23:00 AM
Thanks SO for my placement and Thank you for this lovely timely contest when the gardens are looking lush!!
Date: 7/31/2020 4:03:00 AM
This is amazing. I love it. You've done a brilliant job with this piece. God bless you
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Date: 7/31/2020 4:29:00 AM
Thanks Gina! Thanks for your lovely comments and feedback! Kind regards
Date: 7/30/2020 6:47:00 PM
These bees 'be' so cute, I could pinch their cheeks (if they had any!)... And now I know who to call for a taxi the next time I head for your garden. Thoroughly enjoyed, Krish! Thanks, gw
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Date: 7/30/2020 10:57:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! Ha, ha! Pinching cheeks may have a sting in its tail, but we can fold our hands in gratitude because without them life on earth as we know, will come to an end!!
Date: 7/30/2020 1:49:00 PM
Nothing wrong with lazing in your garden when the weather is fine krish. Enjoy it. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 7/31/2020 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Tom!! Likely to get warmer for the next few days I am told! So more garden!!
Date: 7/30/2020 12:17:00 PM
- Lots of beauty from your chair ... bees are always busy :) - best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2020 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Anne lise! My garden is full of bees and butterflies and birds!! Lots of flowers too!

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