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TO AUTUMN - NO WAY

“Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness” Was how John Keats extolled the Autumntide. But I’m afraid I like the season less, For next comes winter that I can’t abide It’s not for nothing that they call it ‘Fall’. Those falling leaves are nothing but a pain. You sweep them up then, next day, sweep again. And normally it rains as I recall. But, worst of all, it brings back thoughts of Eve, The one who was the apple of my eye. It was October when she chose to leave Without a word of explanation why. So sorry Mr. Keats to be a bore. “To Autumn” doesn’t cut it any more.

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Date: 9/23/2024 6:03:00 PM
Dear Bryn, though I love Fall, I enjoyed your rejection of the typical beauty extolled in autumn verse. Your perspective is captivating and cleverly expressed. I especially enjoyed the wordplay of “worst of all, it brings back thoughts of Eve,/the one who was the apple of my eye”. Congratulations for your success in John’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 9/24/2024 1:08:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Susan. I can take my tongue ot of my cheek now! Best wishes
Date: 9/23/2024 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations Bryn I enjoyed your unique angle on Autumn. I have to agree about the Autumn cleanup being tiresome but it is awesome sometimes when they rain down all at once in a tickling wind. SuZ
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Date: 9/23/2024 12:51:00 PM
a very unique taken the theme Bryn and a bit of a gentle personification of the "fall" thanks for participating in the contest
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 9/23/2024 1:14:00 PM
Thank you John. I enjoyed the contest
Date: 8/30/2024 4:28:00 PM
Very clever take on Autumn. Glad I discovered yout page this evening. You have a good touch of humor in yout poems. SuZ
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 9/23/2024 1:14:00 PM
Thank you SuZ. Your comments much appreciated

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