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I want to thank Michael Coy from the bottom of my heart for helping me write this poem. It's written with blood sweat and tears. Two of the stanzas are written by Michael, the other stanzas are mine.

To An Injured Fox Cub - With Thanks To Michael Coy

Today I found you cornered, drenched in cold,
your fur coat nothing but a newborn's down,
a tiny ball unfolding while I hold
you shivering. Your lacerations frown

and at a distance, I can see the why
of your abandonment, the birds of prey.
I’ve saved you, but you’re causing me to cry:
serrated weapons, Nature’s passion-play,

as blood-attracted sharks, still circling, wait:
I sense the breath-starved fright that made you flee,
those teeth, those claws, you were their blameless bait.
You can’t yet comprehend that you are free.

I see the wounds, some healed, some raw and new,
they're deep, beyond the matted fur and skin.
Four little paws, so tender, sprawled askew,
I seem to feel that you and I are kin.

You mark each move. Mistrustful eyes, so green,
incapable of rest, stir to suggest
you'll try to bite if I will try to clean
the bloodclots, so I hug you to my chest.

You flinch to feel my cuddle. Have I planned
some fiendish way to torture you anew?
The tiny space your wretched life has spanned
has taught you only suffering is your due.

Careful now, I’ll wrap you in a cloth,
And whisper words you cannot comprehend.
Oh tiny one, you're no more than a moth!
It’s alright now. You’ve come across a friend.

Your warmth is blossoming against my breast.
I want to teach you gentleness and calm.
There’s nothing here to threaten you: so rest,
You’re safe now from anxiety and harm.

I'll guard you through the night until you sleep,
until the chesty wheezing eases up.
This is protectiveness, it's seated deep:
I’ll always help a vulnerable pup.

Your heart is racing hard against my hand,
awaiting pain, as wizened captives do.
Believe me, Little One, I understand.
For I have been a broken prisoner, too.

***

May 30, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 3:56 AM
This is so caring and kind, and I am happy to discover you are an animal lover like I! I have many foxes where I live - deer, bear, coyote, opossum, racoon, many birds. I will share a similar story with you sometime, from my own experience. Love the rhythm and flow of this, and the story! (7 - but I couldn't rate it??)
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June 2, 2017 at 4:03 AM
I would love to hear your story! This is not actually a story of an animal I rescued myself. The picture is that of a fox kit, found under the sofa in a house, when the owners returned after a few hours away. The little animal had saved itself from horrors unknown and had almost died. They took care of him, as you can see in the picture.
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June 1, 2017 at 7:54 PM
You have shared your heart in this one Darren and Michael with you makes a wonderful team <3 Your poem shares the feelings so well - both the hurt and the healer... Well done my friend (Michael too!). :)
White Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 1:32 AM
Yes, it is true my friend. Hurt and healer, well said. <3
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June 1, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Darren and Michael, this is a wonderful poem. Your beautiful words are deeply touching as you make us feel how the little wounded animal feels and reveal the special bond that ties you to it. A fave with me and of course a 7, since the ratings are back :) Amitiés
White Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 12:23 PM
Anne-Marie, thank you! That is indeed the connection, revealed in the final two lines. Thanks also for the fav and the 7 :)
Walker Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Wow, this is GREAT Darren ( and Michael). You feel it's fear and the need to help it by the person saving it. So vividly written. This is sad and uplifting at the same time. WELL DONE :)
White Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Thank you. If that is how you feel, I, we, have suceeded Lenna. :)
Smith Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 7:58 AM
So beautiful and sad... sending my love to all
White Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Hi Tim, my friend! Thank you I am glad you like the poem.
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 7:55 AM
This poem is so touching. It really reached me. Congratulations to the both of you for such a special poem written with such care and love :)
White Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 8:23 AM
Heidi, thank you, it makes me feel proud that It reached you. :)
Green Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 7:14 AM
My friend, your poem is tender and heartwarming. This is you from what I know, a caring soul who would happily take in and comfort a frightened young creature knowing how it must feel, scared and alone. Hoping for someone or something to hold it and make it feel safe. This was wonderful Darren.
White Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Thank you so much my friend. That is indeed how I am (I think) :) I am so happy you love my poem
Ricci Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 5:41 AM
Good Afternoon Darren. May the two of you take your bow. Wow. Always am I amazed and honored each time I enter your page Darren. Your expressions always and I mean always reach the emotive factor. This entry goes straight to the heart. How could it not. The both of you have delivered feeling to your readers. Without saying this is top level poetry. Congratulations to you both. Allow me to say bless the injured fox cub and all. Have a wonderful afternoon. E x c e l l e n t
White Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 8:21 AM
I will tell Michael you liked it, he will be pleased :) I will cuddle the little fox for you.
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 4:04 AM
Now that is some of your best and most touching work Boo. It tells your story in such a heartfelt way and I loved every word of it my little injured (yet healing) fox ??. <3 <3 <3
White Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 4:06 AM
<3 <3 <3 my Jason :) Thank you!
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June 1, 2017 at 2:43 AM
- A lot of love and caring in your lines, Darren - A beautiful animal, the fox - Lovely poems - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 2:56 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you. And yes, a whole world in there of love and caring :)
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