Cindi Rockwell Poet Rhyme

To a Voice In My Head

I don't know who you really are, but I love the things you mutter!
Like, "Eat more chocolate! Fat is in! That biscuit needs more butter!"

You said the limit is "Suggested speed. Just hit the pedal harder."
You tell me to just let one rip then accuse another farter!

I almost passed on expensive shoes that looked and fit just great,
Because my account was overdrawn! Thank God you set me straight!

And as I sit here penning this, I love you more than ever.
You were right, I feel so good, having killed my boyfriend Trevor!

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Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2018 at 12:06 AM - Congratulations on this great winning poem, Cindi :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper December 8, 2018 at 8:32 PM Congratulations on your win, Cindi, I can't get rid of the annoying voice.

Silent One December 8, 2018 at 10:53 AM Nice take on the contest Cindi.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Sunita U.D Palawon September 12, 2016 at 7:52 AM Oh!! But this has a real chilling end...a surprise at the end....poor Trevor! :D Congrats Sunita Cindi Rockwell September 12, 2016 at 10:01 AM I find the harshest criticism in the world is "predictable." Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues September 11, 2016 at 9:16 PM Great dark write! Constantly pushing the boundaries, now falling over them! Cindi Rockwell September 11, 2016 at 9:37 PM Thanks!

Sandra Haight September 11, 2016 at 6:43 PM That last line...so unexpected for sure...and chilling! Congrats on your podium win, Cindi. Sandra Cindi Rockwell September 11, 2016 at 9:38 PM Thank you, Sandra!

Beautiful Scars September 11, 2016 at 5:50 PM Cindi, very cute poem lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo Cindi Rockwell September 11, 2016 at 9:39 PM Thanks Laura Loo. Big fan of your work!

Skat A July 28, 2016 at 8:31 PM Cindi, congratulations on your 101 in a row contest win. Luv **SKAT** Cindi Rockwell July 28, 2016 at 8:35 PM Thanks, SKAT!!

Poet Destroyer A July 27, 2016 at 9:55 PM I was moved by your poem, Cindi, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "THE REAL ME." Enjoy your win. Always & Forever (sk)~LINDA~

Jill Spagnola July 14, 2016 at 4:59 AM Cindi I adore the voice in your head that leads to a shocker of an ending. A 7 for sure! peace and love, jill Cindi Rockwell July 14, 2016 at 5:02 AM Thanks, Jill! <3

Frederick Espiritu July 13, 2016 at 10:46 PM love the rhyme of this... funny on the outside, but sad within... nice poem... Cindi Rockwell July 13, 2016 at 10:49 PM Thank you. That's life, right? Funny on the outside, sad within.