To a Secret Love

In my heart I've always loved you
Always thought you good and kind
Though I know you do not know me
Know you're always on my mind

Nights of darkness pass unbroken
By your smile and gentle ways
How I wish that you were present
Here beside me all my days

Light or darkness, rain or shadow
Thoughts of you are light to me
Now I pray that as you read this
Thoughts of me would kindly be

I would be your slave forever
Just to bring a smile or two
Have you walking life beside me
All your blest commands to do

How I hope that you will greet me
Pray you'll see my desp'rate case
Should you not, my heart would founder
Longing for your smiling face



About this poem: It is trochaic, meaning that it starts with a stressed syllable and alternates between a stressed and unstressed the whole way through. The syllable count is 8.7.8.7. Although I wrote this from the viewpoint of a man, it could be read either way.
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Merryman Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 9:11 PM
Isaiah, I enjoyed reading this sweet romantic poem! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 1:56 PM
Isaiah........your poem is very sweet........... congrats!!! SKAT
De Burca Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 4:24 PM
Congrats on your winning poem.
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Isaiah congratulations on your trochaic poem. This is a well deserve win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
Guzzi Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 3:53 PM
Wonderful love story! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
A   Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Isaiah, congratulations with your winning poem, in the "Incurable Romantic" contest... ~xox* Linda
Morrison Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 6:12 PM
This is just a wonderful piece of work Isaiah! Kim
Deason Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:30 PM
ok wow I have only read few of your poems, but I love them sooooo much, you are such a great poet, I would love to get advice from you to make me better, you seen like such a romantic type
St John Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 6:33 PM
wow, this is beautiful Isaiah! Love it!
Gildersleeve Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Isalah congrats on your win. A beautiful write. Well done. Warm Smiles, Connie
Chircop Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 8:28 AM
HmmTo answer your question..I might be having a Valentine fever but Gee look above..We got a romantic..And its Valentine flu.Hope its not epedemic :).Very beautiful ;-)
Chircop Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 8:30 AM
I forgot to congratulste you oops
Ober Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 3:25 PM
So romantic! I know many a gal who would kill to receive a love poem like this ;) Congrats on your win! And in response to your comment earlier today - I definitely share your love of the English language, especially older English. Did you study Literature in school - or History perhaps? I majored in English Literature and minored in Greek History. I'm a bit of a geek that way :)
Veetil Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 12:52 PM
congratulations on your win...this really is great....
Gasun Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 10:37 PM
Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear friend, Isiah! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 9:36 PM
Congratulations on your win with this impressive entry!
A   Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 4:49 PM
Isaiah... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA
Haick Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Isaiah! Beautifully written! Always, Annalise
Guzzi Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 10:39 AM
Congrad's on your win in this contest, it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 8:31 AM
Just fantastic, you are a craftsman, excellent work. Congratulations.
Chircop Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 9:15 AM
I never tried the trochaic style..maybe i will in the near future..tnks for the tip..bravo
Bauer Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 6:14 PM
you've done a wonderful job with the rhythm and the rhymes and have created a lovely poem!
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