To a Raven

Fearless Raven, soaring in
the rich, dark chasm—
that world of shadows, echoes,
cliffs and crags chaotic,
the void of subtle stirrings in
a quintessential midnight—
Make some room for me
on your old, straight wings.
I, too, need to sense
lightning piercing stardust,
galvanizing mountains,
stoking distant thunder.
Let me catch a breath
of your pure, primeval air,
exotic and unshackling
latent, raw, unbounded.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/14/2021 3:11:00 AM
Dear raven make some room for me also. :-) I love your poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/12/2021 10:39:00 PM
* lightning piercing stardust* Im there, what a moving line, the whole poem is a wonderful, soul moving, work.
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Date: 6/2/2021 10:17:00 PM
Lovely poem, Carol ~
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Carol Mays
Date: 6/8/2021 6:49:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 4/21/2019 7:06:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Carol. “ Make some room on your old straight wings for me.” Wonderful line. Better than a dream. Happy Easter and thank you for your uplifting visits. Hugs, Suzanne
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Date: 4/2/2019 6:03:00 PM
Dear Carol. I stumbled onto your poem To a raven, and felt it fitted well a small series of photograps I posted on Instagram, of course with reference to you. Do you by any chance have an instagram name that I can refer to? Regards, Ingimundur See https://www.instagram.com/p/BvxS7vyg0wU/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link
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Carol Mays
Date: 4/2/2019 9:19:00 PM
No, I don't have an Instagram account, but you are welcome to use my poem. Glad you like it.
Date: 3/18/2018 8:02:00 PM
If only we could fly, there would be so much more adventure and freedom to be found in our lives ... I loved this poem, Carol! The dark imagery is just so magical, so beautiful and truly uplifting ... Great writing!
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Carol Mays
Date: 3/20/2018 6:18:00 PM
Hi, Kelly--Thanks so much. I'm glad you also can tune into the magic I was trying to convey.
Date: 12/10/2017 10:30:00 PM
Love the poem ... Me too need to sense the dense earth ...
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Carol Mays
Date: 12/11/2017 5:06:00 PM
Thank you again.
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