To a Place

~
Her love took me to a place,
the likes of which I have never seen
I was lost in the wonder that greeted me
along a pathway of stained glass tiger lilies
and hummingbirds singing in harmony

Where the beauty of the sunrise
was painted in watercolor brushstrokes
upon cerulean skies drifting beyond a
lazy horizon beckoning my eyes
in frilly fonts and promised smiles

I found castles carved of sweet dark chocolate
sitting atop lavender laced hillsides
overlooking evergreen forests
of butterflies and ladybugs
frolicking amidst feathery branches

When there before me floated
a heart shaped dream, crimson red
in satin wishes where we both would live
beside a flowing stream reflecting
every affection and desire we held

Yes, her love took me to this place,
lifting me from a darkness where moons hid
and stars cried beyond ashen clouds,
where happiness was a way of life
and forever a welcomed ending
~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hamilton Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 2:46 PM
This is another stunner Chris, always enjoy your interesting word combinations, dark chocolate castles...I mean...only from your mind could words come to life on the page.
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February 6, 2020 at 3:19 PM
You are far too kind my friend. Thank you for everything John.
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February 5, 2020 at 12:03 PM
I had to fav this one, it's amazing and I must visit those chocolate castles!
Green Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 12:17 PM
They are delicious, that's for sure. : ) Thank you so much M.L.
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 8:35 PM
Just glorious, Chris. You continue to outdo yourself, holding the standard high, which this reader dearly appreciates. Thank you for the treat and privilege of reading the results of your craftmanship. In friendship, Gershon
Green Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Thank you my friend for always being so kind to me
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Your imagery n this beautiful piece is divine Chris! I loved this uplifting poem. xxoo
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February 5, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Thank you so very much Connie. I always look forward to your encouraging and beautiful comments
Horn Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 5:07 PM
There is a place that I know. Think that was West Side Story.
Green Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 5:30 PM
Perhaps it is. Thanks so much.
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February 4, 2020 at 2:13 PM
- Sounds like a heavenly place, Chris - Beautifully written ... stay there forever ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 4, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate your wonderful visits always Anne-Lise.
Roper Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 9:30 PM
Beautiful verse, Chris.
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February 4, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so very much Eve. I am thrilled you liked it.
Sands Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 7:37 PM
Oh, wow. You have written another favorite for me! I love stained glass windows and all the things you poetically mention in this beautiful poem. It has taken me away to a place I will return later. Thank you! Well written Chris :)
Green Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I know I can always count on you to bring some sunshine to my day. Thank you my friend.
Adams Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 7:03 PM
Wow.... This is stellar Chris, you really outdid yourself with this write. So many beautiful images stained glass tiger lilies watercolor brushstroke. Just wow and a big sigh.....hugs
Green Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Thank you Sandy for your beautiful comment. I appreciate you always.
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Simply exquisite! :-) Hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Thank you Jan. I am glad you liked this
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