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To Live a Long Life

Who wants to live long life
       always run from the danger
    aside from stray outsiders bullets
   away  from friendship of strangers

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/28/2019 6:02:00 PM

Hello Alkas Poetry,when ther is violence around someone always get hurt. Guns should be taken away from people that use them to kill people for no reason. have a nice evening my friend.Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2019 2:07:00 PM

Hello Alkas Poetry,there should not be any guns at all. Too many people are getting killed in the USA and Canada. Even children are afraid to go to school afraid to be shot. That is not right. Yet nothing is being done about guns. It is not right! have a nice day my friend.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 8/30/2019 8:27:00 AM

Darlene, now we have in Brasil a President that promotes the use of guns and other weapons... is very sad when people chose such a kind of idiot... Tou are right, guns should be taken away from all... salite have a nice week end my dear, alkas

To Live a Long Life

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