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A glitter of gold whispers of light fireflies dance into the night midnight moon in golden glow roaring waves ebb and flow silent harmony unsung lullaby a drifting melody diamonds in the sky the porch light's flame a distant star on the wings of a dream a journey far 6/9/17

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Heidi Sands

Date: 7/24/2017 11:47:00 AM

Wow , amazing one Joseph ! Well done :)

Afzal Nusker

Date: 6/20/2017 5:12:00 AM

This is the only rhyming poem in the winners' list and so beautifully written. Congrats on your win, Joseph.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/20/2017 12:36:00 AM

Congratulations Joseph. I knew this would be on the winner's list.: )

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/19/2017 11:20:00 PM

I loved your sweet little rhyming poem, Joseph, back to drop in my congratulations on your win:)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/19/2017 10:20:00 PM

Hey Joseph I see you got a nice win, very nicely done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2017 5:36:00 PM

another of my favorites on the winner list. Love how you were able to rhyme it by going short and sweet. I just could not do mine rhymed but I am pleased with how it turned out and I am loving ALL the ones I am seeing. BIG congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2017 4:26:00 PM

Many congrats Joseph, this was one of my favourites!:-) hugs jan xx

Jeremy Smith

Date: 6/19/2017 1:21:00 PM

Yes the rhyme is perfect Joseph :) Great job on this!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/18/2017 3:18:00 AM

I love that you chose rhyme Joseph. This entry is simply magnificent! ; )

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/16/2017 10:37:00 AM

Your poem is excellent, Joseph, like a melodious song :) well done:)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2017 7:12:00 PM

I love all the titles you have use, Joseph..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2017 3:30:00 PM

Your poem ended up so beautiful. I hope I can hurry and do this one. I have so many titles, I do not know where to begin!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/13/2017 4:40:00 AM

The brevity of your words actually adds to the beauty of this gem Joseph. I love it! : )

David Mohn

Date: 6/12/2017 8:06:00 PM

Terrific Joseph...a real beauty

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/12/2017 7:31:00 PM

That's simply amazing, how you did that!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2017 9:03:00 AM

Wow Joseph this is truly beautiful and I am so impressed that you managed to get the lines to rhyme! Very good luck in the contest, this is so lovely:-) hugs Jan xx