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Title Wave

He kept "hanging around"
Hoping for a glimpse down her top
Since he can remember he's been "obsessed with flat"
Perhaps one day it would be "engraved upon his stone"
No beer or big boobs for this poor stiff!

He was afraid his excitement might show
"Ripping" through his zipper
Revealing his "optomistic white" underwear
Yet part of him imagined it "Escaping Gravity",
Would she  look at it and ask "Penny for your thoughts?"
Would there be a "Before and beyond the bed"?
For now he would be happy with just one glimpse
His friends all thought him a bit weird
In the end he'd rather be under her
Than "Under the weight of words"!

For fun I took the titles of my last 9 poems and tried to tell a story.

Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2015

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L Milton Hankins Date: 5/18/2021 7:05:00 PM Interesting, Richard. You must have had your latest contest in mind. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/27/2021 2:31:00 PM I forgot I wrote this one. Thanks for the visit Milton.

Casarah Nance Date: 7/26/2016 6:15:00 PM haha clever, a fun prompt that would be to write around poem titles. sending u some hugs sweetie x Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 4/4/2015 8:21:00 AM Is there anything you can't accomplish with your pen? Any place your originality and creativity won't take you? I don't think so. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/4/2015 9:37:00 AM You are kind Monterey, thanks for the love!

Brian Baumgarn Date: 4/1/2015 2:16:00 AM Ahh, my teenage years. Nervousness and premature ejaculation. I really liked growing up when I did as all the girls had to wear skirts or dresses to school, everyday. I loved the no beer or big boobs line. My ex is really well endowed. We joked that she would have to be buried at the "Garden of Mammaries". Thanks, Richard Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/1/2015 9:07:00 AM Your comment has made me smile! Thanks for the visit.

Kp Nunez Date: 3/31/2015 9:09:00 AM Provocative...coming from your own titles and finely presented in an amusing manner...haha. Kim :) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/31/2015 9:39:00 AM Thanks Kim.;0)

Eve Roper Date: 3/30/2015 9:06:00 PM Well, you did a good job. 7 :) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/31/2015 8:32:00 AM Thanks! ;0)

Maurice Yvonne Date: 3/30/2015 6:36:00 PM Great concept...excellent execution! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/30/2015 8:35:00 PM Thanks Armand. ;0)

Jaycee Cervenka Date: 3/30/2015 1:09:00 PM Left me laughing. What a creative exercise, and fairly difficult too since it requires integrating specific phrases rather than just words. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/30/2015 8:37:00 PM Thanks for the thoughtful post.

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/30/2015 12:06:00 PM We both didn't post today...Just passing by to say ....Hey. Hope things ease up for you soon. Hugs Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/30/2015 8:36:00 PM I enjoyed the two I read this morning. Still busy at this end. Looking forward to Thursday.

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/30/2015 10:54:00 AM very creative and well woven with dashes of sheer fun, rich.. hugggs Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/30/2015 8:37:00 PM Thanks and Huggs Nette.

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 3/30/2015 6:39:00 AM Genius the way you used those titles! Very entertaining and left me asking for more titles - poem:-) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/30/2015 8:43:00 AM Thanks Njeri.

James Horn Date: 3/29/2015 9:17:00 PM Not upside down. Like two TV tubes. From where he sat. Pulled down slow below. Why would someone sit and stare? Maybe me with the mumps. But a bra that is many-tiered. Write one more poem while under the gun. Now you figure out what applies to what. Jim Horn Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/30/2015 8:45:00 AM You might need to explain this comment to me, I must admit it has left me confused.

Mama Bear Date: 3/29/2015 7:00:00 PM would have liked to see what you would have done if you added Florida Nature Interesting play with words. Love Mom Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/30/2015 8:46:00 AM Perhaps squeezing some oranges, *lol*.

Harry Horsman Date: 3/29/2015 5:17:00 PM Been there done that,,and oh you do it so well, powerful title, along with a powerful poem,,this is for the imagination, and boy did i have fun with it... Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/30/2015 8:47:00 AM Thanks Harry, I appreciate the visit.

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/29/2015 4:38:00 PM Oh WOW! That's some write, Richard. I wonder what made you want to do that. Very creative. :) Obsessed with flat, eh? I thought it was the opposite with men! ;) Hugs Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/29/2015 4:42:00 PM In reality flat would not quite cut it, but I must admit I am attracted to small and perky. It is a good thing we all have different preferences. Hugs back to you Eileen.;0)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/29/2015 12:40:00 PM Haha...very clever, Richard...I hope he gets the girl! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/29/2015 4:43:00 PM Thanks Rhonda, I think he gets the girl *lol*.

Jan Allison Date: 3/29/2015 11:38:00 AM extremely creative and very amusing Richard:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/29/2015 4:44:00 PM Thanks Jan, I'm pleased you were amused.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/29/2015 10:08:00 AM VERY creative writing. I was thinking by the title it was for the "homo" contest. haha. BUt you proved me wrong!! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/29/2015 4:47:00 PM I thought about entering the contest but I havn't felt the motivation to give it a go.