Richard Lamoureux Poet I do not know?

Title Wave

He kept "hanging around"
Hoping for a glimpse down her top
Since he can remember he's been "obsessed with flat"
Perhaps one day it would be "engraved upon his stone"
No beer or big boobs for this poor stiff!

He was afraid his excitement might show
"Ripping" through his zipper
Revealing his "optomistic white" underwear
Yet part of him imagined it "Escaping Gravity",
Would she  look at it and ask "Penny for your thoughts?"
Would there be a "Before and beyond the bed"?
For now he would be happy with just one glimpse
His friends all thought him a bit weird
In the end he'd rather be under her
Than "Under the weight of words"!

For fun I took the titles of my last 9 poems and tried to tell a story.

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L Milton Hankins May 18, 2021 at 7:05 PM Interesting, Richard. You must have had your latest contest in mind. Richard Lamoureux May 27, 2021 at 2:31 PM I forgot I wrote this one. Thanks for the visit Milton.

Casarah Nance July 26, 2016 at 6:15 PM haha clever, a fun prompt that would be to write around poem titles. sending u some hugs sweetie x

Monterey Sirak April 4, 2015 at 8:21 AM Is there anything you can't accomplish with your pen? Any place your originality and creativity won't take you? I don't think so. Richard Lamoureux April 4, 2015 at 9:37 AM You are kind Monterey, thanks for the love!

Brian Baumgarn April 1, 2015 at 2:16 AM Ahh, my teenage years. Nervousness and premature ejaculation. I really liked growing up when I did as all the girls had to wear skirts or dresses to school, everyday. I loved the no beer or big boobs line. My ex is really well endowed. We joked that she would have to be buried at the "Garden of Mammaries". Thanks, Richard Richard Lamoureux April 1, 2015 at 9:07 AM Your comment has made me smile! Thanks for the visit.

Kp Nunez March 31, 2015 at 9:09 AM Provocative...coming from your own titles and finely presented in an amusing manner...haha. Kim :) Richard Lamoureux March 31, 2015 at 9:39 AM Thanks Kim.;0)

Eve Roper March 30, 2015 at 9:06 PM Well, you did a good job. 7 :) Richard Lamoureux March 31, 2015 at 8:32 AM Thanks! ;0)

Maurice Yvonne March 30, 2015 at 6:36 PM Great concept...excellent execution! Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 8:35 PM Thanks Armand. ;0)

Jaycee Cervenka March 30, 2015 at 1:09 PM Left me laughing. What a creative exercise, and fairly difficult too since it requires integrating specific phrases rather than just words. Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 8:37 PM Thanks for the thoughtful post.

Eileen Manassian March 30, 2015 at 12:06 PM We both didn't post today...Just passing by to say ....Hey. Hope things ease up for you soon. Hugs Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 8:36 PM I enjoyed the two I read this morning. Still busy at this end. Looking forward to Thursday.

Nette Onclaud March 30, 2015 at 10:54 AM very creative and well woven with dashes of sheer fun, rich.. hugggs Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 8:37 PM Thanks and Huggs Nette.

Njeri Hunjeri March 30, 2015 at 6:39 AM Genius the way you used those titles! Very entertaining and left me asking for more titles - poem:-) Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 8:43 AM Thanks Njeri.

James Horn March 29, 2015 at 9:17 PM Not upside down. Like two TV tubes. From where he sat. Pulled down slow below. Why would someone sit and stare? Maybe me with the mumps. But a bra that is many-tiered. Write one more poem while under the gun. Now you figure out what applies to what. Jim Horn Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 8:45 AM You might need to explain this comment to me, I must admit it has left me confused.

Mama Bear March 29, 2015 at 7:00 PM would have liked to see what you would have done if you added Florida Nature Interesting play with words. Love Mom Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 8:46 AM Perhaps squeezing some oranges, *lol*.

Harry Horsman March 29, 2015 at 5:17 PM Been there done that,,and oh you do it so well, powerful title, along with a powerful poem,,this is for the imagination, and boy did i have fun with it... Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 8:47 AM Thanks Harry, I appreciate the visit.

Eileen Manassian March 29, 2015 at 4:38 PM Oh WOW! That's some write, Richard. I wonder what made you want to do that. Very creative. :) Obsessed with flat, eh? I thought it was the opposite with men! ;) Hugs Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2015 at 4:42 PM In reality flat would not quite cut it, but I must admit I am attracted to small and perky. It is a good thing we all have different preferences. Hugs back to you Eileen.;0)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 29, 2015 at 12:40 PM Haha...very clever, Richard...I hope he gets the girl! Hugs, Rhonda Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2015 at 4:43 PM Thanks Rhonda, I think he gets the girl *lol*.

Jan Allison March 29, 2015 at 11:38 AM extremely creative and very amusing Richard:-) hugs Jan xx Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2015 at 4:44 PM Thanks Jan, I'm pleased you were amused.

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2015 at 10:08 AM VERY creative writing. I was thinking by the title it was for the "homo" contest. haha. BUt you proved me wrong!! Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2015 at 4:47 PM I thought about entering the contest but I havn't felt the motivation to give it a go.