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The light suddenly turns red- he's checking out the girl in the next car. won hm

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Joyce. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 3:37:00 AM

Smiles...a man's tradition! LOL Excellent writing! Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2010 6:33:00 AM

Good Morning Joyce, just here to wish you a happy mothers day, and also I enjoyed your sweet write for the contest,.p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 3:31:00 PM

and what happens next?? Good one!! congratulations, Joyce. LUv, andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/5/2010 9:37:00 AM

Got a little chuckle out to this one...Laughter the best medicine...You have helpled heal me today...Keep the creative pen flowing...Congratulations on the win...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 6:08:00 AM

Congrats on the win

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/5/2010 5:09:00 AM

You saw me ?! ...Congratulations Joyce! I love your poetry. -Robert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 5:06:00 AM

Congrats Joyce on your HM in Brian's contest with this great Monoku which I knew was a great one... enjoy your special honor today.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/3/2010 12:35:00 PM

Very nice, Joyce! These can be challenging...took me a while and a few revisions! lol..Good luck in the contest, Joyce! And thanks for the kind comments...love, audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2010 6:30:00 PM

hahaha. LOVE IT!! bye now, I'm outta here!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/2/2010 2:01:00 PM

Happens all too often.. and still even to me sometimes.. I get a read chuckle out of it.. good entry and good luck Joyce... really appreciate your wise comments on my failed poem... u truly understand ... thankxdxx .. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"