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The light suddenly turns red-

                                           he's checking out the girl in the next car.



won hm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Joyce. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 3:37 AM
Smiles...a man's tradition! LOL Excellent writing! Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J
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May 9, 2010 at 6:33 AM
Good Morning Joyce, just here to wish you a happy mothers day, and also I enjoyed your sweet write for the contest,.p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 3:31 PM
and what happens next?? Good one!! congratulations, Joyce. LUv, andrea
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Got a little chuckle out to this one...Laughter the best medicine...You have helpled heal me today...Keep the creative pen flowing...Congratulations on the win...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 6:08 AM
Congrats on the win
Dufresne Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 5:09 AM
You saw me ?! ...Congratulations Joyce! I love your poetry. -Robert
Sweetheart Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Congrats Joyce on your HM in Brian's contest with this great Monoku which I knew was a great one... enjoy your special honor today.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Haick Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 12:35 PM
Very nice, Joyce! These can be challenging...took me a while and a few revisions! lol..Good luck in the contest, Joyce! And thanks for the kind comments...love, audrey
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 6:30 PM
hahaha. LOVE IT!! bye now, I'm outta here!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 2:01 PM
Happens all too often.. and still even to me sometimes.. I get a read chuckle out of it.. good entry and good luck Joyce... really appreciate your wise comments on my failed poem... u truly understand ... thankxdxx .. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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