Titanic Twins

Trip to the movies to see ship submerged,
Teasing and torment has been Friday's fare.
First an argument o’er who's to go first,
and not-so-nice nephew pulls brother’s hair.

In revenge, the other bloodies an arm;
loud wailing ensues from crocodile eyes.
It’s time to go home now, they’ve lost their charm.
Six-year old twins – a shipwreck, pint-size.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 10:32 AM
nice poem,,,, love the movie and history ;}
Anglesey Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 12:03 PM
A lovely poem with such delightful creative wit.
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Very creative work using the CAPTCHA...Enjoyed reading a few moments from your life..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 3:03 PM
haha, it's adorable, and you got TWO stanzas. Only one I think I saw like this!
Stella Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 7:39 AM
LOL maybe want to put times 2 on here for using letters twice enjoyed the read though and boy sure know this feeling lol great imagery and too play on words as other said thanks for sharing I too did this one
Onclaud Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 12:22 PM
so well put and charming at that.... kids will be kids... love the play of words, reason.. huggs
Delaney Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Love this little alliterative gem. Slips and trips off the tongue so prettily. SuZ
Spooner Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 9:05 AM
From a mother of boys- you made me smile.
Hamilton Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 5:50 AM
nicely done gl in contest Shadow x smiles
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