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Titanic Enemy

TITANIC      ENEMY

None bigger on the sea they say, 
Or more beautiful night and day.
Shape immense and gracefully topping
The waves with purpose unstopping.
In a hurry, appointment with fate.
Big as a castle, and with a great
Sheer-sided, steel-tough wall;
But unable to see ahead at all.
Starry calm sea and waveless:
She faced ahead really eyeless.
The graceful cold white shape immense
Raced south in murderous innocence.
Hardly felt the shudder slight
When it occurred late that night.
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NOTE

This description of the iceberg  is kinda spooky  because of 
the resemblance between the ship and its icy enemy.
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Entered in Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver ‘s  Contest   My heart will go on and on....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/12/2012 7:30:00 AM
good write .
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Date: 4/11/2012 10:34:00 AM
Sidney congrats on your win, nice take on the theme..David
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Date: 4/11/2012 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "My Heart" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2012 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sydney xx
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Date: 3/30/2012 5:07:00 AM
The best to you in the contest Sidney. Have asuper weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2012 10:57:00 AM
Well done, I like it Sidney. - Luck to you in contest, hope for a win. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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