Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Shape

- Titanic -

Mountain of ice                                 a scene so awfully 
                                /\                           0
               /\     ~      /   \                       o                /\
   ~~~~ /   \ ~~~~/      \   ^   /\        O o              /   \         ~~
                                      ¨~~/   \^^o 0 o------- /\   ....  /\ ~~ ooo /\ __
                 ~~                            Titanic 
                                                            sank                                                          
                                                     oo                       ~~ 
                             ~~                    ##                       darkness
                                                     xxxx 
                     ~~~~                      xxxx                in the
                                                II III IIIII                  ////
                                                                          sea 
                            (    cold ... deep         o      O                 )
                           _________     o                oo _________death
                         there are no ballrooms for dancing on the seabed
                           adventure - X - swallowed by the sea ////. \\\\
                                 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~




07.05.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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no 1215
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
3rd place in the contest

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Paul Bell May 14, 2023 at 1:29 AM Can't beat that for skill. Every time I go on a ship now, I always ask, how unsinkable is it.

Unseeking Seeker May 11, 2023 at 7:37 PM Fabulous shape poem! Warmest congratulations on your win, in Brian’s contest, with a podium finish!

Sotto Poet May 11, 2023 at 1:24 PM You wrote a fantastic poem about "Titanic." I truly enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win

Sam Kauffman May 11, 2023 at 9:09 AM Congratulations on your win Anne-Lise. "There are no ballrooms for dancing on the seabed." So poignant. Full of "impact!" So descriptive of the tragedy. Well done my friend. Blessings and hugs!

Len Gasun May 11, 2023 at 1:57 AM Wow! So beautiful and creative! I love and extremely enjoy this. Congratulations on your shining win my dear poet friend Anne-Lise! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Roger Roger May 11, 2023 at 1:33 AM Wow... Both lyrical and artistic... Congratulations...

Kim Rodrigues May 10, 2023 at 6:33 PM there are no ballrooms for dancing on the seabed adventure…Wow!

Joanna Daniel May 9, 2023 at 2:25 AM Great work, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2023 at 2:34 AM - Thank you, Jo :)

Sotto Poet May 8, 2023 at 10:43 AM Very creative and perfectly designed, Anne. A winner for sure, but good luck anyway Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2023 at 2:12 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick May 8, 2023 at 8:01 AM That was one sad event in the history of our world. So many thought it was going to be a great time at sea and a lovely visit to another country. Only a few survived. Thanks for sharing this one and for stopping by my page. It reads like a good contender for Brian's contest to me. Way to go. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2023 at 8:29 AM - A journey that was supposed to be a pleasure... ended terribly, Sara - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit May 8, 2023 at 5:40 AM Creative design. You will be rewarded with a win, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2023 at 6:45 AM - Thank you, Vijay :)

Kim Merryman May 7, 2023 at 8:43 PM Anne-Lise, this is an amazing shape poem! Very well done! Blessings, Kim M Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2023 at 1:25 AM - Thank you, Kim :)

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2023 at 4:22 PM very cool indeed. loved that bottom part and the line about dancing. it was sad how the band kept playing as they sank. Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2023 at 1:25 AM - Thank you, Andrea :)

Ilene Bauer May 7, 2023 at 12:40 PM This is amazingly cool, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2023 at 1:18 PM - Thank you, Ilene :)

Lin Lane May 7, 2023 at 11:51 AM Anne-Lise, you have great skill in word art. It's very impressive, even without the words! Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2023 at 1:18 PM - Thank you, Lin :)