Tis Torture and Not Mercy

Tis torture and not mercy. Heaven is here!
  
 Painfully in reach and yet no power is apt to attain thee. 
 
 What shall then quell passions pursuit? 

Oh heart that yearns for thee alas, such arduous love aroused. 

 Thou oh love alone, can satisfy mine soul’s longing.

Mine heart's own song could not yet free itself from the depths of mine desire for thee.

Every hope is but vain indeed.

I muse at thy enchantments and with bated breath whisper thy name. 

Tis torture true not to hold thee,or caress thy tender cheek with withered hand

False hearted thou wert and yet still thou whispered promised pleasure’s untrue

In silence and tears mine days spent  with the bitter-sweet taste of heaven on mine lips 

and arms that shall never forget.

Tis torture and not mercy, Heaven was here!

written by Lori McClure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Congratulations on this well-deserved win!!!
Onclaud Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 1:59 AM
a well deserved win for this poignant, superb read.. big cheers, lori
A  Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Lori, CONGRATS, on your awesome win......~SKAT~
Deschler Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 8:47 PM
Sometimes, we end up with regret, when we finally receive the things that we want most.... These words are very powerful and expressive. The emotions are bleeding through in every line.... A great write, Lori! Congratulations on your win!
George   Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:47 PM
MANY CONGRATS ON YOUR WELL DESERVED WIN, LORI. LAINIE
Jerden Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Based on previous comments, looks like it was written quite a while ago. Glad you found a home for it. Nothing hurts so sweetly as unrequited love, does it? Congratulations! Cheers, Roy
Sumler Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 9:49 PM
Is this for the Romeo and Juliet contest? Defenitely reads like a classic! Truly a wonderful write Lori!
Cooke Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 4:35 PM
a very good read, i like this a lot. well written, powerful stuff. great poetry.
Brown Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Lori. Love, Carol
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