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Tired of Explaining

Tired of explaining      (a twist from ND. poem)

Ignoring the presence of my stillness==
As you walk with bitterness== 
Your radiance is no longer true== 
A melody with seduction over due== 
The song so bad wiped out by you== 
Rotating my abdomen== 
From the soul==
The worms inside== 
They all die==
Under your control== 
Separating the way==

Is as if though== 
All the beauty in the world== 
Up and lived==
You are more than I need== 
Drowning in my own abyss== 
Judging you one==
Right after the other== 
A hellish so profound== 
Revelations passed so suddenly== 
Expression of limbo, I replay== 
The revenge== 
The revoke== 
Suffer catting my oxygen==

They illness== 
Then lifeless== 
They identify== 
Then disgust== 
Never play the sensitive== 
Feel my needs==
Like the wound full of abscess==
A sore to never go away==
Yes like the illness== 
Then lifeless== 
Dropped addict== 
These shivers down my spine==
Identify, escape, abuse of certain== 
Announcing it even more== 
Proof that I am found== 
Out of love==
 
The mind finally receives==
Revolution with open eyes== 
The heart is trapped to proceed== 
Cleverer than the open skies==
Old sweat glands in my hand== 
Retiring the mind== 
The best of my heart has no stand== 
Died from your retrieving cries== 
Advancing to my knowledge== 
The darkness that you lend== 
DISCLOSURE== 
to== 

In the depth of your eyes ==
I run before you hypnotize== 

Oblivious to the Valley of your wits==
 
Refusing to relive the song== 
Feeling that are gone==

Never will it feel right==

I still feel the rotation==
Exhale went out your soul== 

Exiting far from sight==
Revoke an end to your light== 

A kiss of death to your good night==
A kiss of death to your good night== 


(To: Nathan Dilts my way of explaining love over due)

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Cynthia Jones Date: 4/13/2015 1:37:00 PM Linda, this write is fantastic. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 4/14/2013 10:30:00 AM Hi, my loving sis! Thank you so much for my sweet comments and the warm congratulations on my poem. I went to the featured poems page to check it and I saw that yours as well. I’m also extending my warmest and hearty congratulations with hugs and hugs as well on your Featured Poem of the Week! As usual, I love this stellar write of yours so much and I’m embracing it while reading once again. Take care, have a blessed Sunday & enjoy the week ahead too my dearest sis! Love much 4ever, Leo Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/13/2013 10:03:00 PM yeah me... LOL Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 4/13/2013 8:48:00 PM Linda, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Soup! I pray you had a good day. Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/11/2013 9:25:00 AM Congrats on this passionate, nearly fatal revelation being chosen. Love, daver Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 4/9/2013 12:32:00 AM The Poem is Cute My Heroine... I admire Your Strength... Ride on. Thanks for the kind comment you made on my piece... Enjoy! ~A.O Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 1/27/2013 8:36:00 AM Hello, my loving sis and greatest poet! Stopping by to say "Hi", good night here and good morning there. Hope you're doing well. You've written this poem excellently and great! I love it! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day there! Sending my love and hugs again! 4ever, Leonora Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/14/2012 2:20:00 PM love this Parody, so inspiring, such depth... Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 12/8/2010 9:36:00 AM wow you let him have it.john cant find letter to santa Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/20/2010 10:11:00 AM soupmail again-- did you get my 1st one? do reply if you can I am getting sleepy zzzzzzz past 1am here...thanks Login to Reply

Jay Loveless Date: 5/11/2010 10:08:00 AM this is one of the strongest writes i have ever had the pleasure to read. bravo .:The Lost Poet:. Login to Reply

Kevin Semeniuk Date: 5/7/2010 6:09:00 PM niice write!..a lot of levels and layers and a lot to take in!.. Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 5/7/2010 5:54:00 PM this is wow, really all i can say for now. 'in the depth of your eyes.i run before you hypnotize' your line means far more. reminds me of many things that are linked together. interesting, your poem makes me think. tired of explaining, it gets harder and harder as the run goes on, in your creation of this empty abyss.great write. . -Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Phil Boy Date: 5/7/2010 4:37:00 PM I see! kool Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 5/6/2010 8:21:00 AM sad dark poem--i will have to read nathans Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 5/6/2010 12:17:00 AM Walt Whitman-esque...cool...jimbo Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/5/2010 4:06:00 PM Thankxxx P.D. BBF and so appreciate your wonderful encouraging comments on my poetry reads.. its so nice to have a new friend who truly is a friend... and a blessing as well... hope u will be entering some of these great contests too... with luv from the "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Derrick Burton Date: 5/5/2010 5:41:00 AM yeah that was good, seems like you would write an awesome song. Enjoy your day and it was good read another poem from you.:) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/5/2010 4:33:00 AM soup mail Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/5/2010 4:28:00 AM In the depth of your eyes,i run before you hyptonize,lol. You are very creative Mr Mysterious.I love Nathan's work and Your work ,So much. .talent. .Charma. Login to Reply

David Byrne Date: 5/4/2010 8:08:00 PM really good! Login to Reply

Royal Trevino Date: 5/4/2010 4:32:00 PM wow breathless... i just finished reading nathan's post... how did ya do it, this is absolutely awesome how you changed the words and made it more you, the both writes were just too good... loved it Login to Reply

Destiny Orschell Date: 5/4/2010 3:51:00 PM I find it absolutely amazing how you transformed a happy, cheerful poem into something the complete opposite. Ya'll did great. Keep it up. Love Destiny Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 5/4/2010 3:36:00 PM Again, PD, thanks for your ongoing comments...Have agreat week!!! Gert Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 5/4/2010 1:25:00 PM yes i agree. Brilliant!!!!! i like your style P.D. your poetry is art i can see and feel. and you have THE gift. yes, i am a friend you can call a friend. much respect and best of all laughter. John Henry Loving III great repost! pd; is that french or what? Login to Reply

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